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Using the main points and examples from the lecture, describe the Skinner Box, and then explain how the device is used in psychology experiments. v.1

Using the main points and examples from the lecture, describe the Skinner Box, and then explain how the device is used in psychology experiments. v. 1
In recent times, learning things on the internet has become increasingly common. Despite its gain in the number of users, there are people who would still prefer to study in an on-campus institution. I believe that acquiring new skills online is a positive development and it would make a wonderful complement to studying in a physical building. There are a number of reasons to support this phenomenon. Firstly, the individual is free to pursue their course of interest at any time and any place. This gives the students an enormous amount of independence with regards to their schedule and that makes it a very attractive option for our modern lifestyle. Secondly, school fees for web-based courses are usually cheaper than enrolling in a polytechnic or university, which also makes it appealing for those who are curious about learning something but are not certain if they would want to commit to it fully. On the other hand, institutions of education are here for a reason. They hold with them years of teaching accomplishments and alumni who have gone on to become very successful in their careers. A job candidate graduating from an Ivy League university will be more likely to get hired than a student who obtained their qualifications online. In addition, people get to make friends with their classmates and they are also able to clarify all their doubts with the teacher on the spot. This would not be possible with e-learning, as everything is done in solitude. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that these two forms or learning should not be separated, but rather be used in concomitant with one another. I foresee that our future will not fade away from attending physical establishments, but that people will still get their full fledge certifications from colleges and varsities while gaining bite sizes of knowledge from the freedom of their electronic device at the same time.
In recent times, learning things on the internet has become
increasingly
common. Despite its gain in the number of users, there are
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people
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who
would
still
prefer to study in an on-campus institution. I believe that acquiring new
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skills
online is a
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positive
development and it would
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make
a wonderful complement to studying in a physical building.

There are a number of reasons to support this phenomenon.
Firstly
, the individual is free to pursue their course of interest at any time and any place. This gives the students an enormous amount of independence
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with regards to
their schedule and that
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makes
it a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
attractive option for our modern lifestyle.
Secondly
, school fees for web-based courses are
usually
cheaper than enrolling in a polytechnic or university, which
also
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makes
it appealing for those
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who
are curious about learning something
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but
are not certain if they would want to commit to it
fully
.

On the other hand
, institutions of education are here for a reason. They hold with them years of teaching accomplishments and alumni
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who
have gone on to become
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very
successful in their careers. A job candidate graduating from an Ivy League university will be more likely to
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get
hired than a student
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who
obtained their qualifications online.
In addition
,
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people
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get
to
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make
friends with their
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classmates and
they are
also
able to clarify all their doubts with the teacher on the spot. This would not be possible with e-learning, as everything
is done
in solitude.

In conclusion
, I am of the opinion that these two forms or learning should not
be separated
,
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but
rather
be
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used
in concomitant with one another. I foresee that our future will not fade away from attending physical establishments,
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but
that
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people
will
still
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get
their full
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fledge
certifications from colleges and varsities while gaining bite sizes of knowledge from the freedom of their electronic device at the same time.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Using the main points and examples from the lecture, describe the Skinner Box, and then explain how the device is used in psychology experiments. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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