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Using points from the lecture, explain how the passion plant and the potato plant defend themselves from insects. v.1

Using points from the lecture, explain how the passion plant and the potato plant defend themselves from insects. v. 1
Nowadays, more often than not, people tend to make purchases without compromising their choices; hence, a similar range of products are widely available among almost all countries across the globe, leading them to become an identical marketplace. In my opinion, this trend is highly advantageous as it does not only offer variety, but also cost-effectiveness. The cogent reason why the concept of the globalized market is significant because it can serve a variety of product. Whenever a customer plan to buy anything, they can easily compare both international and domestic items, enabling them to attain the best commodity out of their spend. For example, I bought a laptop bag, since it was an Indian brand, after comparing it with the available native products in Dubai last year. Thus, as long as customers are willing to explore buying option for a particular product, having a wide range in the regional market is certainly helpful. Furthermore, this trend is often proved an incredibly economical way of shopping. As more retailers lead in the market to sell their product, make it a competitive situation, it becomes a lot cheaper for any customer to but any item. To Illustrate, since an Australian sports brand has opened a store in our area, they have acquired the market share by 5% because they offer cheap deals. Therefore, as long as a competitive pricing is crucial, a concept of global market is the key to achieve it. To conclude, different countries are developing as a mirror image of each other, enabling people to buy the same product in almost everywhere in the world. This essay explained how similar marketplace can offer a range of product and cheaper option to buy from. I believe that this is an entirely positive development because it provides a liberty and less costly way of shopping.
Nowadays, more
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often
than not,
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people
tend to
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make
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purchases
without compromising their choices;
hence
, a similar range of
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products
are
widely
available among almost all countries across the globe, leading them to become an identical marketplace. In my opinion, this trend is
highly
advantageous as it does not
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only
offer variety,
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but
also
cost-effectiveness.

The cogent reason why the concept of the globalized
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market
is significant
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because
it can serve a variety of
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product
. Whenever a customer plan to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
anything, they can
easily
compare both international and domestic items, enabling them to attain the best commodity out of their spend.
For example
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a laptop bag, since it was an Indian brand, after comparing it with the available native
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products
in Dubai last year.
Thus
, as long as customers are willing to explore buying option for a particular
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product
, having a wide range in the regional
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market
is
certainly
helpful.

Furthermore
, this trend is
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often
proved an
incredibly
economical way of shopping. As more retailers lead in the
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market
to sell their
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product
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it a competitive situation, it becomes a lot cheaper for any customer to
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but
any item. To Illustrate, since an Australian sports brand has opened a store in our area, they have acquired the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
market
share by 5%
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because
they offer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
deals.
Therefore
, as long as a competitive pricing is crucial, a concept of global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
market
is the key to achieve it.

To conclude
,
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different
countries are developing as a mirror image of each other, enabling
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people
to
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buy
the same
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product
in almost everywhere in the world. This essay
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explained
how similar marketplace can offer a range of
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product
and cheaper option to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
from. I believe that this is an
entirely
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positive
development
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it provides a liberty and less costly way of shopping.
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IELTS essay Using points from the lecture, explain how the passion plant and the potato plant defend themselves from insects. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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