Religious people tend to believe that boys and girls have to attend to separate schools. Meanwhile, most people without a religious background think that mixed schools are the best option to educate their children. In my opinion, children need to be raised in an environment similar to the one they will live as adults.
Mixed schools generate an environment where boys and girls can meet and develop a relationship of understanding. In addition to this, both genders could learn from each other and share different points of view regarding the same subject. Consequently, in schools where boys and girls study together students tend to be more open minded.
Although mixed schools seem to be the most convenient place to raise new generations, the religious community believes that children should be educated in separate facilities. The main reason why they think this way is that kids might get distracted. Therefore, they could become more interested in love than in their studies. For instance, when I was a teenager, I went to a mixed school and two girls from my class got pregnant at the age of 16. However, love should be part of the context where children grow up since this would help them to create stronger relationships between each other.
To conclude, I strongly advise parents to send their children to mixed schools where they can learn the difference between genders and they can become more understanding adults in the future. In my opinion, if this generation of children is raised in separate schools, this will produce a society where males and females would not be able to share the same rights.
Religious
people
tend to believe that boys and
girls
have to
attend to separate
schools
. Meanwhile, most
people
without a religious background
think
that
mixed
schools
are the best option to educate their
children
. In my opinion,
children
need to
be raised
in an environment similar to the one they will
live
as adults.
Mixed
schools
generate an environment where boys and
girls
can
meet
and develop a relationship of understanding.
In addition
to this, both genders could learn from each other and share
different
points of view regarding the same subject.
Consequently
, in
schools
where boys and
girls
study together students tend to be more
open minded
.
Although
mixed
schools
seem to be the most convenient place to raise new generations, the religious community believes that
children
should
be educated
in separate facilities. The main reason why they
think
this way is that kids might
get
distracted.
Therefore
, they could become more interested in
love
than in their studies.
For instance
, when I was a
teenager
, I went to a
mixed
school
and two
girls
from my
class
got
pregnant at the age of 16.
However
,
love
should be part of the context where
children
grow up since this would
help
them to create stronger relationships between each other.
To conclude
, I
strongly
advise parents to
send
their
children
to
mixed
schools
where they can learn the difference between
genders and
they can become more understanding adults in the future. In my opinion, if this generation of
children
is raised
in separate
schools
, this will produce a society where males and females would not be able to share the same rights.
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