It is argued that untouched areas of the Earth should be exploited in order to obtain more energy resources due to the rise of the world's need for oil and gas. This essay is going to disagree with this statement and present two reasons why we cannot continue digging natural elements of our planet.
Despite the expansion of manufacturing industries in developing countries represents growth in their economy and also the demand in fossil fuel, they should be avoided because they are extremely polluting when extracted to be burned for energy production. For example, the increasing numbers of cars in a city using oil or gas to move means the rise of carbon dioxide emissions. As a result, the poor quality of the air in that city would affect the population health while this would also stress global warming effects.
Furthermore, it is not clever to rely on non renewable resources to develop economies since these virgin materials have limited availability and can become scarce. For instance, governments should subsidise the development of renewable energy such as solar panels, wind farms and electric engines for cars. By doing this, we would make sure we have enough resources to keep growing the economy of our countries without depending on finite raw materials.
To conclude, I totally disagree that we need to discover new fossil fuel sources to continue promoting the development of nations. In my opinion, we should use clean and sustainable energy resources that could be reused infinite times.
It
is argued
that untouched areas of the Earth should
be exploited
in order to obtain more
energy
resources due to the rise of the world's need for oil and gas. This essay is going to disagree with this statement and present two reasons why we cannot continue digging natural elements of our planet.
Despite the expansion of manufacturing industries in
developing countries
represents growth in their economy and
also
the demand in fossil fuel, they should
be avoided
because
they are
extremely
polluting when extracted to
be burned
for
energy
production.
For example
, the increasing numbers of cars in a city using oil or gas to
move
means the rise of carbon dioxide emissions.
As a result
, the poor quality of the air in that city would affect the population health while this would
also
stress
global warming effects.
Furthermore
, it is not clever to rely on
non renewable
resources to develop economies since these virgin materials have limited availability and can become scarce.
For instance
,
governments
should
subsidise
the development of renewable
energy
such as solar panels, wind farms and electric engines for cars. By doing this, we would
make
sure we have
enough
resources to
keep
growing the economy of our countries without depending on finite raw materials.
To conclude
, I
totally
disagree that we need to discover new fossil fuel sources to continue promoting the development of nations. In my opinion, we should
use
clean and sustainable
energy
resources that could
be reused
infinite times.
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