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Using points and examples from the lecture, explain the changes in Elizabethan period and why they occured. v.1

Using points and examples from the lecture, explain the changes in Elizabethan period and why they occured. v. 1
It is true that nowadays garbage has been produced at an alarm ring rate. This essay will give a reason about why is this happening and what all steps government can take to mitigate this problem. In my opinion the reason could be population, as the population size is skyrocketing and the demand of the population is increasing therefore there is an increase in the rubbish produced by them. For example, in a restaurant we see a lot of food is wasted which eventually is thrown away in the garbage. Also, an increase in industrialization has also impacted the environment, as rubbish or waste coming out of factory pollutes the water and the environment and therefore, impacts the health of the public. Government should take serious steps to overcome this problem, they can make strict rules for the restaurant people to not throw their food instead, they should feed the leftovers to the poor and needy people, and for factories, it should be located far away from the city so the by -products and wastes of the factory does not affect the health of the people. In a nutshell, though we all know that it is the responsibility of the government to take due care of all the issues related to the public, but it is the utmost responsibility of the citizens to plummet stacking of rubbish bags at a place and instead throw them in an appropriate place from where they can be taken and can be used in a right manner.
It is true that nowadays garbage has
been produced
at an alarm ring rate. This essay will give a reason about why is this happening and what all steps
government
can take to mitigate this problem.

In my opinion the reason could be population, as the population size is skyrocketing and the demand of the population is increasing
therefore
there is an increase in the rubbish produced by them.
For example
, in a restaurant we
see
a lot of
food
is wasted
which
eventually
is thrown
away in the garbage.
Also
, an increase in industrialization has
also
impacted the environment, as rubbish or waste coming out of factory pollutes the water and the environment and
therefore
, impacts the health of the public.

Government
should take serious steps to overcome this problem, they can
make
strict
rules
for the restaurant
people
to not throw their food
instead
, they should feed the leftovers to the poor and needy
people
, and for factories, it should
be located
far away from the city
so
the by -products and wastes of the factory does not affect the health of the
people
.

In a nutshell, though we all know that it is the responsibility of the
government
to take due care of all the issues related to the public,
but
it is the utmost responsibility of the citizens to plummet stacking of rubbish bags at a place and
instead
throw them in an appropriate place from where they can
be taken
and can be
used
in a right manner
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Using points and examples from the lecture, explain the changes in Elizabethan period and why they occured. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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