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Using details from the talk, describe the function of politicalcartoons and the components of their success. v.1

Using details from the talk, describe the function of politicalcartoons and the components of their success. v. 1
It is undeniable that the children of modern era are attracted towards online education. Some people think that it is mandatory for a child to use online materials for learning to read while others argue that printed form is the best for reading. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will provide an opinion at the conclusion. One of the main advantages of using online reading materials is the presence of attractive content. In other words, kids will be more interested in reading materials with colourful images and videos. Additionally, the materials can be easily accessed online and the lessons are available anytime provided an internet connection is available. For instance, a child who wants to learn about plants can search the internet and results will be enormous. The supporters of printed material believe that traditional reading method through books is the best option. They strongly think that information present in printed materials are written by certified authors and false proofed multiple times so the chances of error are minimal. In addition to that, the physical copy of a book encourages a kid to focus on one item at a single point of time. Finally, these printed versions of materials are available at any time and can be accessed anywhere at an affordable cost. For example, a kid buys a book at the railway station while waiting for a train. In conclusion, online education is becoming more and more popular with the young crowd. In my opinion, even though reading through printed books has been followed as a traditional method over many decades, we can move towards online reading with the use of latest technology.
It is undeniable that the children of modern era
are attracted
towards
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online
education.
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Some
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people
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think
that it is mandatory for a child to
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use
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online
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materials
for learning to read while others argue that
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printed
form is the best for
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reading
. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will provide an opinion at the conclusion.

One of the main advantages of using
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online
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reading
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materials
is the presence of attractive content.
In other words
, kids will be more interested in
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reading
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materials
with
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colourful
images and videos.
Additionally
, the
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materials
can be
easily
accessed
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online
and the lessons are available anytime provided an internet connection is available.
For instance
, a child who wants to learn about plants can search the internet and results will be enormous.

The supporters of
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printed
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material
believe that traditional
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reading
method through
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books
is the best option. They
strongly
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think
that information present in
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printed
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materials
are written
by certified authors and false proofed multiple times
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so
the chances of error are minimal.
In addition
to that, the physical copy of a
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book
encourages a kid to focus on one item at a single point of time.
Finally
, these
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printed
versions of
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materials
are available at any time and can
be accessed
anywhere at an affordable cost.
For example
, a kid
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buys
a
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book
at the railway station while waiting for a train.

In conclusion
,
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online
education is becoming more and more popular with the young crowd. In my opinion,
even though
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reading
through
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printed
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books
has
been followed
as a traditional method over
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many
decades, we can
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move
towards
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online
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reading
with the
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use
of
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
technology.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Using details from the talk, describe the function of politicalcartoons and the components of their success. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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