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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. v. 3
Over recent years, more and more people have been attending universities for higher education. Certain people believe that students are privileged to attain free education, regardless of their financial status, While others disagree with this notion. Since there are convincing arguments on both sides, I partially agree with this statement. On the one hand, educated citizens are an asset to the country. When universities provide free education, people of all financial conditions can acquire knowledge without any discrimination. Otherwise, only rich and middle-class students will attend the classes and lower-class students are dissuaded to go to universities. When everyone in the country is educated, the workforce will be smart enough and produce good quality products. Moreover, these people will contribute to the development of the economy by paying an adequate amount of taxes. Thus, the government will have enough money to spend on furthers areas for the sake of people. On the other hand, the cost of learning is soaring in this world. Due to inflation in the global market, the cost of research equipment and other inevitable items are rising. The university grants are limited and if universities provide free teaching to all, they may be forced to compensate in other areas and it will reflect in the quality standard of education. Additionally, when all people are educated and heading for white-collar jobs, there will not be enough people for blue-collar jobs. For instance, carpentry, masonry, and plumbing need skilled workers. To sum up, everyone in society gets an equal opportunity to gain knowledge when universities provide free education. But university may be forced to compensate the quality of training. Thus, there are advantages and disadvantages of free education.
Over recent years, more and more
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people
have been attending
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universities
for higher
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education
. Certain
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people
believe that students
are privileged
to attain
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free
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education
, regardless of their financial status, While others disagree with this notion. Since there are convincing arguments on both sides, I
partially
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agree
with this statement.

On the one hand, educated citizens are an asset to the country. When
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universities
provide
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free
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education
,
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people
of all financial conditions can acquire knowledge without any discrimination.
Otherwise
,
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only
rich and middle-
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class
students will attend the classes and lower-
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class
students
are dissuaded
to go to
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universities
. When everyone in the country
is educated
, the workforce will be smart
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enough
and produce
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good
quality products.
Moreover
, these
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people
will contribute to the development of the economy by paying an adequate amount of taxes.
Thus
, the
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government
will have
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enough
money to spend on furthers areas for the sake of
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people
.

On the
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other
hand, the cost of learning is soaring in this world. Due to inflation in the global market, the cost of research equipment and
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other
inevitable items are rising. The
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university
grants
are limited
and if
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universities
provide
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free
teaching to all, they may
be forced
to compensate in
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other
areas and it will reflect in the quality standard of
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education
.
Additionally
, when all
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people
are educated
and heading for white-collar jobs, there will not be
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enough
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people
for blue-collar jobs.
For instance
, carpentry, masonry, and plumbing need skilled workers.

To sum up, everyone in society
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gets
an equal opportunity to gain knowledge when
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universities
provide
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free
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education
.
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But
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university
may
be forced
to compensate the quality of training.
Thus
, there are advantages and disadvantages of
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free
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education
.
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IELTS essay University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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