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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. v. 1
People hold different opinions about the the relationship between university education and tution fee. Many people reckon that students may not charge for tution bill in university. For my perspective, I am partly agree with this statement for many convincing reasons. In fact, education fee is becoming more and more expensive to fund as universities grow in size. Therefore, It is believed that If univiersity is in the stage of finacially independent by making students pay to maintain standards and ensure the quality of the teaching, It will be the greatest way to reduce the burden on goverments, especially in the developing countries which have got a tight budget. In addition, it is believed that most students benefit from university in terms of higher paid jobs in the future, so it is fair that they pay for at least some of the cos. Last but not least, in many countries, it has been maintaining the stage of too many chiefs, not enough Indians. It mean is a shortage of people to do manual jobs such as plumbing and carpentry, so making university more expensive may encourage people to take up these jobs. On the other hand, many people agree to make university education free for everyone. Firstly, it will encourage more people to attend university and break the wealth gap. The opportunity to access the university education will divide equally to everyone no matter their family’s background. This is because it will lead to a more productive and educated and even fair workforce. Many people has generally believed that those countries that have a better educated labor via university have higher levels of innovation and productivity that is more benefit for sociaty. Last but not least, the more university graduates seek the high-paid job, the more money tax they should to pay for goverment. To the gorverment authorities, It is a bussiness to worthly investigate without the high-rate adventure. In summary for the mentioned above, It can be affirmed that the effect of financial factor on the university education. Thus, it is highly recommended that. Not only the leader of universities but alsoauthorities of gorverment calculate to receive the low-paid tiution fee that make all of the student afford to pay for that.
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education
and
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tution
fee.
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people
reckon that
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may not charge for
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tution
bill in
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university
. For my perspective, I am partly
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agree
with this statement for
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many
convincing reasons.

In fact,
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education
fee is becoming more and more expensive to fund as
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universities
grow in size.
Therefore
, It
is believed
that If
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univiersity
is in the stage of
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finacially
independent by making
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students
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pay
to maintain standards and ensure the quality of the teaching, It will be the greatest way to
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reduce
the burden on
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goverments
,
especially
in the
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developing countries
which have
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got
a tight budget.
In addition
, it
is believed
that most
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students
benefit from
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university
in terms of higher paid jobs in the future,
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it is
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fair
that they
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for at least
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cos. Last
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not least, in
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many
countries, it has been maintaining the stage of too
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many
chiefs, not
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enough
Indians. It
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mean
is a shortage of
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people
to do manual jobs such as plumbing and carpentry,
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so
making
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university
more expensive may encourage
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people
to take up these jobs.

On the other hand
,
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many
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people
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agree
to
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make
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university
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education
free for everyone.
Firstly
, it will encourage more
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people
to attend
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university
and break the wealth gap. The opportunity to access the
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university
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education
will divide
equally
to everyone no matter their family’s background. This is
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because
it will lead to a more productive and educated and even
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fair
workforce.
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Many
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people
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has
generally
believed that those countries that have a better educated labor via
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university
have higher levels of innovation and productivity
that is
more benefit for
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sociaty
. Last
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but
not least, the more
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university
graduates seek the high-paid job, the more money tax they should to
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pay
for
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goverment
. To the
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gorverment
authorities, It is a
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bussiness
to
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worthly
investigate without the high-rate adventure.

In summary for the mentioned above, It can
be affirmed
that the effect of financial factor on the
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university
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education
.
Thus
, it is
highly
recommended that. Not
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only
the leader of
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universities
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but
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alsoauthorities
of
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gorverment
calculate to receive the low-paid
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tiution
fee that
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make
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all of the
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student
afford to
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pay
for that.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Mistakes

IELTS essay University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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