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Travelling is the one of most important experience of human's life. People gain practical experience while they travel from one place to another. It also increase there surviving skill by travelling to new places. What some people think that they v.2

Travelling is the one of most important experience of human's life. People gain practical experience while they travel from one place to another. It also increase there surviving skill by travelling to new places. What some people think that they v. 2
MEDIA PEOPLE DIPICTING MORE CRIME ATTEMTED BY OFFSPRINGS. THIS ESSAY CONCURE AND DISCUSS VARIOUS SOLITIONS TO TAKLE THIS PROBLEM. TO START WITH, FROM AN INDIVIDUAL POINT OF VIEW, CHILDREN DO CRIME BECAUSE OF LACK OF KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING ABOUT LIFE. SO, PARENT SHOULD HAVE MORE CONCERN ABOUT THEIR CHILD, DO THEIR PROPER UPBRINGING AND TEACH THEM HOW TO BE A GOOD MEMBER OF THE SOCIETY AS WELL AS A CITIZEN. FOR AN EXAMPLE, MY NEIGHBOR'S SON ATTEMTED ROBBARY WHEN HE WAS 15 YEAR OLD BECAUSE THEY DID NOT TAUGHT THEIR OFFSPRING ABOUT AWAFUL BEHAVIOUR AND WHAT ARE THE RESULTS OF COMMITING OFFENCE. THUS, PARENTS SHOULD GUIDE THEM BY BEING FRIENDLY AND OPEN-MINDED WITH TODAY'S GENERATION. AS A RESULY, THERE WILL BE A LESS NUMBER OF CRIME. MOREOVER, GOVERNMENT ALSO DO SOME PROGRAMS LIKE OPEN A REHABILITIATION CENTERS IN WHICH OFFENDERS CAN GET INFORMATION ABOUT GOOD BEHAVIOUR AND HOW TO GET RID OF BAD HABITS. TO ELABORATE, AUTHORITY SHOULD IMPLIMENT STRICKT RULES LIKE REHABILITATION IS MANDATORY FOR ALL CRIMINALS AND FOR ANYKIND OF CRIMES. FOR AN INSTANCE, IF ONE IS A MURDERER AND OTHER HAVE DONE ROBBARY THAN THERE ARE NO EXCEMPTION FOR RUBBERS JUST BECAUSE THEY ARE JUST A THIEF. THIS APPROACH ENCOURAGE EXCISTED CRIMINALS TO BE A RESPONSIBLE MEMBER OF THE NATION. IN ADDITION TO THIS, ALSO THERE SHOULD BE SOME RESTRICTIONS FOR MEDIA PEOPLE. TO ILLUSTRATE, LAWS IN WHICH THEY HAVE THE BOUNDRIES AND DUTYIES MENTION. SO THAT, THEY KNOW WHAT NEWS THEY MAY PUBLISH AND WHAT NOT. FOR AN EXAMPLE, IF THEY GET A NEWS SUCH AS, ONE SCHOOLER HAS ATTEMTED THIEFT. THEN, THE MEDIA UNALLOWED TO TELECAST THIS NEWS ON THE TELEVISION. BECAUSE IT WILL INFLUENCE MANY OTHER STUDENTS TOO. BUT IF THEY GET THE INFORMATION LIKE RAPE HAS ATTEMTED BY 25 YEAR OLD BOY, THEN THEY SHOULD DEFINATLY SHOW THE NEWS BECAUSE THIS MAKES PUBLIV AWARE OF CURRENTS SITUATION. TO SUM UP, HOWEVER, IT IS TRUE THAT MEDIA SHOULD HAVE RIGHT TO PUBLISH ANY CRIME. BUT, I THINK WITH JUVENILE THEY SHOULD BE MORE CAREFFUL ABOUT WHEN AND WHAT TO SHOW. EVRYONE IS RESPONSIBLE TO MAKE SOME CHANGES IN THE COUNTRY.
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PEOPLE
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MORE
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CRIME
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OFFSPRINGS
. THIS ESSAY
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CONCURE
AND DISCUSS VARIOUS
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TO
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TAKLE
THIS PROBLEM.

TO
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WITH, FROM AN INDIVIDUAL POINT OF VIEW, CHILDREN DO
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CRIME
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BECAUSE
OF LACK OF KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING ABOUT LIFE.
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SO
, PARENT SHOULD HAVE MORE CONCERN ABOUT THEIR CHILD, DO THEIR PROPER UPBRINGING AND TEACH THEM HOW TO BE A
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GOOD
MEMBER OF THE SOCIETY
AS WELL
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ATTEMTED
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ROBBARY
WHEN HE WAS 15 YEAR
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THEY DID NOT
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THEIR OFFSPRING ABOUT
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AWAFUL
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BEHAVIOUR
AND WHAT ARE THE RESULTS OF
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COMMITING
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OFFENCE
.
THUS
, PARENTS SHOULD GUIDE THEM BY BEING FRIENDLY AND OPEN-MINDED WITH
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RESULY
, THERE WILL BE A LESS NUMBER OF CRIME.

MOREOVER
,
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GOVERNMENT
ALSO
DO
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SOME
PROGRAMS LIKE OPEN A
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REHABILITIATION
CENTERS IN WHICH OFFENDERS CAN
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GET
INFORMATION ABOUT
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GOOD
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BEHAVIOUR
AND HOW TO
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ANYKIND
OF
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CRIMES
. FOR AN INSTANCE, IF ONE IS A MURDERER AND OTHER HAVE DONE
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ROBBARY
THAN THERE ARE NO
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EXCEMPTION
FOR RUBBERS
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BECAUSE
THEY ARE
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A THIEF. THIS APPROACH ENCOURAGE
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EXCISTED
CRIMINALS TO BE A RESPONSIBLE MEMBER OF THE NATION.
IN ADDITION
TO THIS,
ALSO
THERE SHOULD BE
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SOME
RESTRICTIONS FOR
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MEDIA
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PEOPLE
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BOUNDRIES
AND
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DUTYIES
MENTION.
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THEY MAY PUBLISH AND WHAT NOT. FOR AN EXAMPLE, IF THEY
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ATTEMTED
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THIEFT
. THEN, THE
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MEDIA
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UNALLOWED
TO TELECAST THIS
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NEWS
ON THE TELEVISION.
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BECAUSE
IT WILL INFLUENCE
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MANY
OTHER STUDENTS TOO.
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IF THEY
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GET
THE INFORMATION LIKE RAPE HAS
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ATTEMTED
BY 25 YEAR
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BOY, THEN THEY SHOULD
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DEFINATLY
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THIS
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MAKES
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PUBLIV
AWARE OF CURRENTS SITUATION.

TO SUM UP,
HOWEVER
, IT IS TRUE THAT
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MEDIA
SHOULD HAVE RIGHT TO PUBLISH ANY
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CRIME
.
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BUT
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THINK
WITH JUVENILE THEY SHOULD BE MORE
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CAREFFUL
ABOUT WHEN AND WHAT TO
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SHOW
.
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EVRYONE
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MAKE
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SOME
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CHANGES
IN THE COUNTRY.
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IELTS essay Travelling is the one of most important experience of human's life. People gain practical experience while they travel from one place to another. It also increase there surviving skill by travelling to new places. What some people think that they v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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