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Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use. v.1

Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use. v. 1
With the use of one global currency, there will be many benefits in travelling and cross-border business. I agree with the statement that trade and travel would be a lot easier with the use of one global currency. However, there might be some problems. Let’s discuss the pros and cons. When thinking of one currency, everyone points to the Euro. It is a common currency which is being used in multiple countries of Europe. European citizens and other tourists travelling to Europe don’t have to carry multiple currencies. Only one currency works in such countries and people don’t bother about the exchange rates as well. Similarly, global deals of business and trade will be straight forward as this will be without the fluctuation of forex rates. The conversion hassle and global acceptance of a currency would be reduced and some monopoly in trading would be reduced. Although, the idea of global currency is very appealing but there might be some issues in its implementation at the global level. There are more than 200 countries and each has its own currency. No two currencies have the same exchange rate. During the crossborder deals, the forex difference plays a vital role. With the use of one single currency, countries having higher exchange rates with respect to other will be at receiving end and have to bear the deficit. In the end, it is concluded that one global currency is beneficial for the general public. But there would be challenges in its implementation. Once the problems and issues are resolved, it would be a lot easier for the business community as well as for the travellers and tourists.
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use
of one
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global
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currency
, there will be
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many
benefits in travelling and cross-border business. I
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agree
with the statement that trade and travel would be a lot easier with the
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use
of one
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global
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currency
.
However
, there might be
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some
problems.
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Let
’s discuss the pros and cons.

When thinking of one
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currency
, everyone points to the Euro. It is a common
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currency
which is being
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used
in multiple
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countries
of Europe. European citizens and other tourists travelling to Europe don’t
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have to
carry multiple
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currencies
.
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Only
one
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currency
works in such
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countries
and
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people
don’t bother about the exchange
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rates
as well
.
Similarly
,
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global
deals of business and trade will be straight forward as this will be without the fluctuation of forex
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rates
. The conversion hassle and
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global
acceptance of a
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currency
would be
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reduced
and
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some
monopoly in trading would be
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reduced
.

Although, the
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idea
of
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global
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is
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very
appealing
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but
there might be
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some
issues in its implementation at the
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global
level. There are more than 200
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countries
and each has its
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own
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currency
. No two
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currencies
have the same exchange
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rate
. During the
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crossborder
deals, the forex difference plays a vital role. With the
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use
of one single
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currency
,
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countries
having higher exchange
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rates
with respect to other will be at receiving
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end
and
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have to
bear the deficit.

In the
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end
, it
is concluded
that one
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global
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currency
is beneficial for the
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general public
.
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But
there would be challenges in its implementation. Once the problems and issues
are resolved
, it would be a lot easier for the business community
as well
as for the
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travellers
and tourists.
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27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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