Science and technology are of great importance to humans, as well as music and art. While some are more interested in musicians and artists in the present-day, others show more importance to scientists and technology specialists. I strongly disagree that science and technology are more valued because I believe that people generate a better response towards music and art.
In terms of music, people are able to relate to it on a subjective level, as they have favourite musicians whose songs can communicate exactly how they feel in particular situations. In addition, it is only logical to be attracted by delightful melodies and significant words. When someone is feeling low, they listen to a song with a nice rhythm and as a result they feel better. For example, I personally have a favourite boy band which I listen to whenever I'm in despair, and they always seem to be able to lift up my mood.
With regards to art, time and money are spent by tourists to discover artworks all over the world. Tourism is a very diffuse phenomenon nowadays, as it feeds the curiosity that individuals have about other cultures' monuments and paintings. People who are passionate about the latter also attend displays, in which famous portraits are shown to the public. For instance, I've had a friend who purchased a fine illustration of an artist of the nineteenth century for a huge amount of money.
In conclusion, music and art are of a greater importance in the current days, in opposition to science and technology, as people are willing to travel around the world to discover new worlds and they can aswell relate to an artist on a personal level.
Science and
technology
are of great importance to humans,
as well
as
music
and art. While
some
are more interested in musicians and artists in the present-day, others
show
more importance to scientists and
technology
specialists. I
strongly
disagree that science and
technology
are more valued
because
I believe that
people
generate a better response towards
music
and art.
In terms of
music
,
people
are able to relate to it on a subjective level, as they have
favourite
musicians whose songs can communicate exactly how they feel
in particular
situations.
In addition
, it is
only
logical to
be attracted
by delightful melodies and significant words. When someone is feeling low, they listen to a song with a nice rhythm and
as a result
they feel better.
For example
, I
personally
have a
favourite
boy band which I listen to whenever I'm in despair, and they always seem to be able to
lift up
my mood.
With regards to
art, time and money
are spent
by tourists to discover artworks all over the world. Tourism is a
very
diffuse phenomenon nowadays, as it feeds the curiosity that individuals have about other cultures' monuments and paintings.
People
who are passionate about the latter
also
attend displays, in which
famous
portraits
are shown
to the public.
For instance
, I've had a friend who
purchased
a fine illustration of an artist of the nineteenth century for a huge amount of money.
In conclusion
,
music
and art are of a greater importance in the
current
days, in opposition to science and
technology
, as
people
are willing to travel around the world to discover new
worlds and
they can
aswell
relate to an artist on a personal level.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes