It is often argued that wedding parties should be done in a big and costly way as it may benefit the couple. However, I completely disagree and think that weddings should be cost effective and done in a moderate way.
Firstly, big parties are usually very money consuming and may pose as a burden on the newly married pair. This is because of the huge funds that go into the big day as the couple may have to borrow money to fund their day. For example, a friend of mine and his wife wanted a very big wedding and had to take a bank loan to support their marriage party. After the party, they struggled to pay back and this had a adverse effect on their marriage. Therefore, I believe that it is better to cut your coat according to your size inorder to avoid unnecessary burden on your marriage.
Secondly, large weddings are usually considered stressful and time consuming. This is because they usually require lots of planning to achieve a beautiful event. For instance, 60% of Nigerian weddings are usually done in a big way and due to the amount of time needed to plan the event, most couples end up being stressed up after their special day. Therefore, it is more advantageous to have a smaller wedding to reduce the planning time.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that marriage ceremonys should be done in a small way to reduce the money burden, time spent and stress caused as a result of the event.
It is
often
argued that
wedding
parties
should
be done
in a
big
and costly way as it may benefit the couple.
However
, I completely disagree and
think
that
weddings
should
be cost
effective and done
in a moderate way
.
Firstly
,
big
parties
are
usually
very
money consuming and may pose as a burden on the
newly
married pair. This is
because
of the huge funds that go into the
big
day as the couple may
have to
borrow money to fund their day.
For example
, a friend of mine and his wife wanted a
very
big
wedding
and had to take a bank loan to support their marriage
party
. After the
party
, they struggled to pay back and this had
a
adverse effect on their marriage.
Therefore
, I believe that it is better to
cut
your coat according to your size
inorder
to avoid unnecessary burden on your marriage.
Secondly
, large
weddings
are
usually
considered stressful and
time consuming
. This is
because
they
usually
require lots of planning to achieve a
beautiful
event
.
For instance
, 60% of Nigerian
weddings
are
usually
done in a
big
way and due to the amount of time needed to plan the
event
, most couples
end
up being
stressed
up after their special day.
Therefore
, it is more advantageous to have a smaller
wedding
to
reduce
the planning time.
In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that marriage
ceremonys
should
be done
in a
small
way to
reduce
the money burden, time spent and
stress
caused
as a result
of the
event
.
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