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TPO11-Q1: Talk about an interesting book you have read. Explain why you thought the book was interesting. Give specific details and examples to explain to answer. v.1

TPO11-Q1: Talk about an interesting book you have read. Explain why you thought the book was interesting. Give specific details and examples to explain to answer. v. 1
Humankind is taking the mother nature for granted and disturbing the ecosystem. However, now it is high time to understand how precious this gift is for every individual. This essay will outline why to comprehend the significance of nature for every person on this earth and the ways to people aware of this. Indeed, commercialization rendered confidence to humans, compete with nature for their comfort, for example, the creation of artificial heat and air conditioner to breathe, the packaged and the processed foods to eat, the filtered water to drink. Therefore, ramifications for all of this are contaminated air, water, and food is causing severe health problems and global warming. Recently an article published in - Edmonton Journal- stated that since the last decade, 72% of people prefer to involve indoor activities rather than spending time in an open environment are the major reasons for critical ailments. Firstly, the authorities should advertise the benefits of the organic environment to discourage society from insensitive acts toward the ecosystem. Secondly, children should study methods to preserve the greenery, air, and water in their school curriculum. Besides this, they should also be aware of the effects of the detrimental practices such as deforestation, pollution and littering on the earth. Thirdly, the government should rope in the eminent personalities to influence the audience for saving nature not only for upcoming generations, but also for the prevention of the extinction of other creatures on this planet. For instance, many well-known films and sports stars have already persuaded their fans for this extraordinary cause.
Humankind is taking the mother
nature
for granted and disturbing the ecosystem.
However
,
now
it is high time to understand how precious this gift is for every individual. This essay will outline why to comprehend the significance of
nature
for every person on this earth and the ways to
people
aware of this.

Indeed
, commercialization rendered confidence to humans, compete with
nature
for their comfort,
for example
, the creation of artificial heat and air conditioner to breathe, the packaged and the processed foods to eat, the filtered water to drink.
Therefore
, ramifications for all of this
are contaminated
air, water, and food is causing severe health problems and global warming. Recently an article published in
-
Edmonton Journal- stated that since the last decade, 72% of
people
prefer to involve indoor activities
rather
than spending time in an open environment are the major reasons for critical ailments.

Firstly
, the authorities should advertise the benefits of the organic environment to discourage society from insensitive acts toward the ecosystem.
Secondly
, children should study methods to preserve the greenery, air, and water in their school curriculum.
Besides
this, they should
also
be aware of the effects of the detrimental practices such as deforestation, pollution and littering on the earth.
Thirdly
, the
government
should rope in the eminent personalities to influence the audience for saving
nature
not
only
for upcoming generations,
but
also
for the prevention of the extinction of other creatures on this planet.
For instance
,
many
well-known films and sports stars have already persuaded their fans for this extraordinary cause.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO11-Q1: Talk about an interesting book you have read. Explain why you thought the book was interesting. Give specific details and examples to explain to answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
258 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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