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TPO 38 task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more enjoyable for students to read works of fiction such as novels and stories than nonfiction Use specific examples and details to support your opinion v.1

TPO 38 task 2 It is more enjoyable for students to read works of fiction such as novels and stories than nonfiction Use specific examples and details to support your opinion v. 1
As the topic points out the root cause of isolation behaviour in humans is to be the television. In the olden days, the entertainment box was thought to be a boom in connecting the world with its latest news, geography and politics. Even though, the information is bombarded at nano seconds to its viewers, it does not necessarily restrict the age appropriate contents. In addition to the repetitive news, the productive time of the people is largely wasted. Nowadays, majority of the content focus mainly on the TRP and drama rather than the education. As a result, people tend to be more inclined with the monster box rather spending quality moment with friends and family. Owing to the consequences of the invention, many intellectual people avoided the hours spent on TVs and concentrated more towards the betterment of themselves by reading books. Firstly, books enlarge our thinking capabilities by allowing us to dream big and understand the limits, whereas the satellite triggered shows only use our visualizing ability without the need to think and act. In addition to, over-use of this in a longer term will delimit our logical capabilities and impart our mind with false reports. Furthermore, our minds can be corrupted by repeated broadcast of allegations, corruptions and mystery which will change our belief system on the whole. In Conclusion, man needs to differentiate between good and bad and act according to it. As keeping our faiths undisturbed and spending quality time with the family is more important than any show that is being telecasted.
As
the topic points out the root cause of isolation
behaviour
in humans is to be the television. In the olden days, the entertainment box was
thought
to be a boom in connecting the world with its latest news, geography and politics.
Even though
, the information
is bombarded
at
nano seconds
to its viewers, it does not
necessarily
restrict the age appropriate contents.

In addition
to the repetitive news, the productive time of the
people
is
largely
wasted. Nowadays,
majority of
the content focus
mainly
on the TRP and drama
rather
than the education.
As a result
,
people
tend to be more inclined with the monster box
rather
spending quality moment with friends and family. Owing to the consequences of the invention,
many
intellectual
people
avoided the hours spent on TVs and concentrated more towards the betterment of themselves by reading books.

Firstly
, books enlarge our thinking capabilities by allowing us to dream
big
and understand the limits, whereas the satellite triggered
shows
only
use
our visualizing ability without the need to
think
and act.
In addition
to, over-
use
of this in a longer term will delimit our logical capabilities and impart our mind with false reports.
Furthermore
, our minds can
be corrupted
by repeated broadcast of allegations, corruptions and mystery which will
change
our belief system
on the whole
.

In Conclusion
,
man
needs to differentiate between
good
and
bad
and act according to it. As keeping our faiths undisturbed and spending quality time with the family is more
important
than any
show
that is
being
telecasted
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO 38 task 2 It is more enjoyable for students to read works of fiction such as novels and stories than nonfiction Use specific examples and details to support your opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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