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TPO 38 - Q2Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable for students to read works of fiction (such as novels and stories) than nonfiction. Use specific examples and details to support your opinion. v.1

TPO 38 - Q2 It is more enjoyable for students to read works of fiction (such as novels and stories) than nonfiction. Use specific examples and details to support your opinion. v. 1
Good ecosystem and clean environment lead to the sustainable lifestyle. Every government should provide its citizens with clean and healthy environment while every citizen must care about the environment and be aware of the consequences of their own actions. Thus, when doubts arise whether a government have to make recycling, people are likely to have divided opinions. This essay will prove that in order to live in a sustainable world, authorities should take steps to make reusing a legal requirement. First of all, if recycling is made as a legislation more and more people will consciously manage their household waste and adopt this practise. For instance, in 2015 Sweden made a recycling an official requirement. As a result, Sweden’s total waste statics decreased by half so far. Therefore, humans are more aware of ecology if they are bound by the law. Secondly, the government should also provide citizens with adequate facilities and open access to these recycling units. Hence, before enacting a law, the governments must build recycling facilities in all towns and villages. If there is a statute and appropriate recycling facilities in place, all people will certainly find a better use for their household waste. To sum up, enacting a law that makes recycling a legal requirement will certainly encourage more people to adopt this habit. So, authorities should take note and start to build strong relationships with ecology.
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Good
ecosystem and clean environment lead to the sustainable lifestyle. Every
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government
should provide its citizens with clean and healthy environment while every citizen
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
care about the environment and be aware of the consequences of their
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own
actions.
Thus
, when doubts arise whether a
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government
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have to
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make
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recycling
,
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people
are likely to have divided opinions. This essay will prove that in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a sustainable world, authorities should take steps to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
reusing a legal requirement.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, if
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recycling
is made
as a legislation more and more
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people
will
consciously
manage their household waste and adopt this
Possible spelling mistake. 'practise' is British English.
practise
.
For instance
, in 2015 Sweden made a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
an official requirement.
As a result
, Sweden’s total waste statics decreased by half
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so
far.
Therefore
, humans are more aware of ecology if they
are bound
by the law.

Secondly
, the
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government
should
also
provide citizens with adequate facilities and open access to these
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recycling
units.
Hence
,
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before
enacting a law, the
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governments
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must
build
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recycling
facilities in all towns and villages. If there is a statute and appropriate
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recycling
facilities in place, all
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people
will
certainly
find a better
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for their household waste.

To sum up, enacting a law that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
a legal requirement will
certainly
encourage more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to adopt this habit.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, authorities should take note and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to build strong relationships with ecology.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS essay TPO 38 - Q2 It is more enjoyable for students to read works of fiction (such as novels and stories) than nonfiction. Use specific examples and details to support your opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
231 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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