Writing Task 1 The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up to the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v.1
Writing Task 1 The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up to the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v. 1
People have different views about crimes and their punishment. In some places, the number of young age crime is escalating. Few people say that teenage criminals should be given adult punishment, not concentrating on age. While I agree that youth should not be given adult punishment. I believe that they must be given an adult sort of punishment according to the crimes.
On the one hand, people argue that juvenile criminal must not be punished according to their age because of some reasons. The first and the foremost reason is that they change when they are given less punishment related to their age. Thus, there is a probability for reduced crime rates in young people. Secondly, If you put them into adult damnation there is a possibility the crime rates increase when they are left in society. Finally, they are under more risk of psychological effects where they become not only more aggressive to everyone, but also leading them into Mental disorders in their older age. For instance, In London, A 2017 study by the Cambridge University London, founded that young criminals are under more danger for Mental Disorders compared to adult criminals by 45%.
On the other hand, i believe that they should be given punishments as like for a grown person. Due to some reasons. If they are not given matured punishments, they become more lavish and bold that they can get into more crimes. In addition to this, they also teach their peers about the crimes and thus leading to increased crime rates. In Scotland, For example, An article of 2015, Times of India stated that young criminals spread their crime ideas to their friends of about 20%. Moreover, there is a higher probability that they get into an immoral activity like getting addicted to drugs, alcohol and cigarettes.
In conclusion, although I do not agree that young criminals should be given punishment because of criminals change, crime rates decrease and psychological effect. I believe that major crime committing young criminals should be given adult-related punishment as it escalates crimes, lavishness and boldness and bad habits.
People
have
different
views about
crimes
and their
punishment
. In
some
places, the number of
young
age
crime
is escalating. Few
people
say that teenage
criminals
should be
given
adult
punishment
, not concentrating on
age
.
While
I
agree
that youth should not be
given
adult
punishment
. I believe that they
must
be
given
an adult sort of
punishment
according to the crimes.
On the one hand,
people
argue that juvenile
criminal
must
not
be punished
according to their
age
because
of
some
reasons. The
first
and the foremost reason is that they
change
when they are
given
less
punishment
related to their
age
.
Thus
, there is a probability for
reduced
crime
rates
in
young
people
.
Secondly
, If you put them into adult damnation there is a possibility the
crime
rates
increase when they are
left
in society.
Finally
, they are under more
risk
of psychological effects where they become not
only
more aggressive to everyone,
but
also
leading them into Mental disorders in their older
age
.
For instance
, In London, A 2017 study by the Cambridge University London, founded that
young
criminals
are under more
danger
for Mental Disorders compared to adult
criminals
by 45%.
On the other hand
,
i
believe that they should be
given
punishments
as like for a grown person. Due to
some
reasons. If they are not
given
matured
punishments
, they become more lavish and bold that they can
get
into more
crimes
.
In addition
to this, they
also
teach their peers about the
crimes
and
thus
leading to increased
crime
rates
. In Scotland,
For example
, An article of 2015, Times of India stated that
young
criminals
spread their
crime
ideas
to their friends of about 20%.
Moreover
, there is a higher probability that they
get
into an immoral activity like getting addicted to drugs, alcohol and cigarettes.
In conclusion
, although I do not
agree
that
young
criminals
should be
given
punishment
because
of
criminals
change
,
crime
rates
decrease and psychological effect. I believe that major
crime
committing
young
criminals
should be
given
adult-related
punishment
as it escalates
crimes
, lavishness and boldness and
bad
habits.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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