Never before have almost all industries manufactured that great number of redundant products as they are nowadays. Furthermore, this situation gradually is resulting in the degradation of nature. Mainly, the problem may be addressed either by influencing financial part of such businesses or by making the system of distribution of the resources be more accurate. I strongly believe these methods should be implemented simultaneously since such future outcome will be more beneficial.
In as much as the root of the issue concerns not only one enterprise the governments should develop a strategy of the non-waste production. By virtue of there are different types consumers on the planet divided by the region of their dwelling, the history and etcetera, the analyses have to be based on these data. Moreover, a lot of humans suffer from the starvation and the lack of electricity while main problems of others are obesity and light pollution. Hence, the dilemma should be combated in this way.
In addition to that this system may require some taxes to be put since have never the entrepreneurs been cared about preserving the environment as much as about their pecuniary resources. Thus, what should be done is increase the sums of taxation on surplus wastes in all industry sectors. In fact, it is believed to show more effectiveness afterwards.
To conclude, the issue of damaging nature by human activity is highly critical and actual nowadays. Consequently, it has to be faced immediately with the humanoid attitude and the correct calculations. 
Never  
before
 have almost all industries manufactured that great number of redundant products as they are nowadays.  
Furthermore
, this situation  
gradually
 is resulting in the degradation of nature.  
Mainly
, the problem may  
be addressed
 either by influencing financial part of such businesses or by making the system of distribution of the resources be more accurate. I  
strongly
 believe these methods should  
be implemented
  simultaneously
 since such future outcome will be more beneficial.
In as much as the root of the issue concerns not  
only
 one enterprise the  
governments
 should develop a strategy of the non-waste production. By virtue of there are  
different
 types consumers on the planet divided by the region of their dwelling, the history and etcetera, the analyses  
have to
  be based
 on these data.  
Moreover
,  
a lot of
 humans suffer from the starvation and the lack of electricity while main problems of others are obesity and light pollution.  
Hence
, the dilemma should  
be combated
 in this way. 
In addition
 to that this system may require  
some
 taxes to  
be put
 since have never the entrepreneurs  
been cared
 about preserving the environment as much as about their pecuniary resources.  
Thus
, what should  
be done
 is increase the sums of taxation on surplus wastes in all industry sectors. In fact, it  
is believed
 to  
show
 more effectiveness afterwards. 
To conclude
, the issue of damaging nature by human activity is  
highly
 critical and actual nowadays.  
Consequently
, it  
has to
  be faced
 immediately with the humanoid attitude and the correct calculations. 
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