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TPO 33: Agree/Disagree: When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, students will learn much more effectively than ask them to do alone. v.1

TPO 33: Agree/Disagree: When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, students will learn much more effectively than ask them to do alone. v. 1
Teacher plays an indispensable role in students' personal development. However, whether teachers ask students to work on a project together rather than work on a project alone is worth of some debates. In my point of view, I' m in favor of the statement that teachers should ask student to do project by themselves. My statement will be substantiated by following paragraphs. First of all, students who work on a project by themselves have to learn and do all the details in the process and it enhanced students' academic abilities. For example, I took the Java programing class last semester, and was asked to do a course project by myself. To complete the project, I search so much information on the internet and discuss withe professor after the class. During the process, I have learnt a lot of programing skills which are not taught in the class, and all the knowledge were so impressive to me because I work on all the project by myself. Second, some people may state that working together can makes student cooperate and learn more. However, doing a project together often makes one of the student get lazy and lets another student do most of the project. Takes my personal experience as an example, I have taken an electronics lab class which asked us to do a group project. My teammate, Jacky is lazy and not familiar with the electric circuits and I had to do most of the work. In the end of semester, i feel so exhausted because Jacky didn' t help me at all. The grade was not good and Jacky got the same grade as I got. Therefore, doing a project together not only makes a student learn less but also is unfair to grade the students. In conclusion, according to the reasons mentioned above, I am convincing that the teachers should ask students to work on a assign project along which can let students to learn more and avoid any students getting lazy.
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, I search
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10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO 33: Agree/Disagree: When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, students will learn much more effectively than ask them to do alone. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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