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TPO 29/1: Which of following job or career do you think would be rewarding: University professorEnvironmental scientistNewspaper journalist v.1

TPO 29/1: Which of following job or career do you think would be rewarding: University professorEnvironmental scientistNewspaper journalist v. 1
Everyday waste is on the rise in a good number of nations. This could be as a result of increased packaging of consumer goods, but enforcing recycling of non-biodegradable products could be adopted to curb this problem. The assembling of goods in packs is on the rise. Manufacturers now package products that were not originally packed before. This can be seen in the case of everyday consumables such as sachet water. In Nigeria, drinking water was traditionally sold in Jerry cans or at most plastic bottles, and the majority of households use water filter tanks as their reservoir. Nowadays, the advent of this non-biodegradable and non-reusable packs form a major part of everyday garbage in Nigeria. One of the ways to curtail this problem is that the government should enact policies on recycling of waste. This policy or law will enforce the manufacturers to set up outlets for collection of their product packs for appropriate management. For instance, in Germany, producers contract their distributors and retailers to not only collect empty bottles and plastic cans from customers, but also offer incentives upon return of these items. This strategy has helped to minimize the quantity of daily rubbish generated in the country. In conclusion, increased packaging of goods is implicated as a major contributor of the high amount of day to day waste. However, enforcement of government policy on recycling of these packs is a strategy that can be adopted to ameliorate this problem.
Everyday waste is on the rise in a
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good
number of nations. This could be
as a result
of increased packaging of consumer
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goods
,
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but
enforcing recycling of non-biodegradable products could
be adopted
to curb this problem.

The assembling of
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goods
in
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packs
is on the rise. Manufacturers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
package products that were not
originally
packed
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before
. This
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can
be
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seen
in the case of everyday consumables such as sachet water. In Nigeria, drinking water was
traditionally
sold in Jerry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cans
or at most plastic bottles, and the majority of households
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
water filter tanks as their reservoir. Nowadays, the advent of this non-biodegradable and non-reusable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
packs
form a major part of everyday garbage in Nigeria.

One of the ways to curtail this problem is that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should enact policies on recycling of waste. This policy or law will enforce the manufacturers to set up outlets for collection of their product
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
packs
for appropriate management.
For instance
, in Germany, producers contract their distributors and retailers to not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
collect empty bottles and plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cans
from customers,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
offer incentives upon return of these items. This strategy has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
to minimize the quantity of daily rubbish generated in the country.

In conclusion
, increased packaging of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
is implicated
as a major contributor of the high amount of day to day waste.
However
, enforcement of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
policy on recycling of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
packs
is a strategy that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
can
be adopted
to ameliorate this problem.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO 29/1: Which of following job or career do you think would be rewarding: University professorEnvironmental scientistNewspaper journalist v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
243 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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