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TPO 23 independent Agree or disagree in today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct v.1

TPO 23 independent Agree or disagree in today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct v. 1
Nowadays, nobody can deny, the significant demand for testing. However, many people claim that this testing exhaust both students and teachers. In this essay, I will prove why I believe the exams and testing are playing an integral part in our educational life because of many reasons should be taken into account, such as the follow-up. Currently, many people think that exams are a waste of the curriculum, as we can find many students made considerable efforts to study and while they trying to solve the exams under pressure, they divert their focus and tend to lose more marks. However, they can answer the same questions flawlessly without the exams. Furthermore, many teachers do not have the skills and professionalism to prepare a precise exam with fair questions. As a result of these reasons, it can be considered that testing leads to unfair results and people guarantee that, evaluation is not the perfect way to assess the learners. Conversely, many people and I believe that the tests and exams are the best way to keep the student wake up, fresh and up to date, but with some modifications and better measurements we can get a magnificent and super results with small efforts. For instance, reducing the number of tests every year, so people will not have stress most of the time, in addition to that the exams should be prepared by highly specialized teachers, so we can guarantee the perception and question fairness. To elaborate, in a high school they have a good care and support because it is a critical and imperative educational time, so they have a strong and successful exam system which keeps the people always up to date. For these reasons, I recommend to conduct exams. In conclusion, it is significantly obvious that people may vary in their opinions according to many factors, but I totally agree that a fair exam system will help a brilliant education system's progress.
Nowadays, nobody can deny, the significant demand for
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However
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many
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people
claim that this
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testing
exhaust both students and teachers. In this essay, I will prove why I believe the exams and
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testing
are playing an integral part in our educational life
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because
of
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reasons should
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Currently
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many
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people
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think
that exams are a waste of the curriculum, as we can find
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many
students made considerable efforts to study and while
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to solve the exams under pressure, they divert their focus and tend to lose more marks.
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, they can answer the same questions
flawlessly
without the exams.
Furthermore
,
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many
teachers do not have the
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skills
and professionalism to prepare a precise exam with
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fair
questions.
As a result
of these reasons, it can
be considered
that
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testing
leads to unfair results and
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people
guarantee that, evaluation is not the perfect way to assess the learners.

Conversely
,
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many
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people
and I believe that the
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and exams are the best way to
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keep
the student wake up, fresh and up to date,
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but
with
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some
modifications and better measurements we can
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get
a magnificent and super results with
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small
efforts.
For instance
, reducing the number of
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tests
every year,
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so
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people
will not have
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stress
most of the time,
in addition
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be prepared
by
highly
specialized teachers,
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so
we can guarantee the perception and question fairness. To elaborate, in a high school they have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
care and support
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because
it is a critical and imperative educational time,
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so
they have a strong and successful exam system which
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keeps
the
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people
always up to date. For these reasons, I recommend to conduct exams.

In conclusion
, it is
significantly
obvious that
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people
may vary in their opinions according to
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many
factors,
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but
I
totally
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agree
that a
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exam system will
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help
a brilliant education system's progress.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay TPO 23 independent Agree or disagree in today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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