There is no denying that in today's world of advanced technology, childhood of this generation is totally different than a few decades earlier. The following paragraphs will discuss about the drawbacks of these changes.
First and foremost, children today are more tech savvy and have little interaction with others. Due to this reason, children would not able to gather the values which their elders used to tell them. For instance, in the old days, listening to stories from the elders was one of the major entertainment of children, but now because of advanced gadgets they do not have time for these things. Therefore, children nowadays are deprived of this knowledge and are sometimes are rude and not helpful to their friends and family, which in the long term will impact negatively on the society.
Secondly, as children are more into social media and video games, they pay less attention to the physical games. This lifestyle pushes them towards obesity and many other health issues. So, if their habits are not changed, then society will be greatly impacted due to the less active workforce and national economy can fall. On the top of this, countries might need to make more investment towards health care which ultimately will put more pressure on the taxpayers that may demotivates them to work.
In conclusion, technology is a good thing which helps individuals and nations to grow, but giving full access to children will definitely have many negative consequences which include bad behaviour, physical and mental health.
There is no denying that in
today
's world of advanced technology, childhood of this generation is
totally
different
than
a few decades earlier. The following paragraphs will
discuss about the
drawbacks of these
changes
.
First
and foremost,
children
today
are more
tech savvy
and have
little
interaction with others. Due to this reason,
children
would not able to gather the values which their elders
used
to
tell
them.
For instance
, in the
old
days, listening to stories from the elders was one of the major entertainment of
children
,
but
now
because
of advanced gadgets they do not have time for these things.
Therefore
,
children
nowadays
are deprived
of this knowledge and are
sometimes
are rude and not helpful to their friends and family, which in the long term will impact
negatively
on the society.
Secondly
, as
children
are more into social media and video games, they pay less attention to the physical games. This lifestyle pushes them towards obesity and
many
other health issues.
So
, if their habits are not
changed
, then society will be
greatly
impacted due to the less active workforce and national economy can fall. On the top of this, countries might need to
make
more investment towards health care which
ultimately
will put more pressure on the taxpayers that may demotivates them to work.
In conclusion
, technology is a
good
thing which
helps
individuals and nations to grow,
but
giving full access to
children
will definitely have
many
negative
consequences which include
bad
behaviour
, physical and mental health.
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