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TPO 07 - Question 2State whether you agree or disagree with the following statement. Then explain your reasons, using specific details in your explanation. Learning through online courses is more effective than learning in the traditional classroom settin v.1

TPO 07 - Question 2State whether you agree or disagree with the following statement. Then explain your reasons, using specific details in your explanation. Learning through online courses is more effective than learning in the traditional classroom settin v. 1
Recently the preparation of food has become easier due to the development of new technology. This has resulted in ease of peoples' lives as well as saved the time, which can be utilized in some other important works. But, this gives rise to the question that, how these differ the lives of the people? This essay will discuss that why I agree that due to rapid changes has eased the lives of people in food preparing and will then finally come to a reasoned conclusion. There are two reasons which explain that how food preparation has made the lives of people developed. Firstly, is the provision of sophisticated materials of technology, which has made the wastage reduction to a very low amount. In the past, there were no advanced inventions that we enjoy today to cook food for ourselves. People used to rely mostly on hand made cooking and ancient methods, which were ultimately causing the issue of non-delicious meals and even the consideration of wastage of ingredients. For example, the introduction of new recipes through new methods has not only made the taste of foods tastier, but also reduce the amount of waste that were caused by the use of ancient ways. Thus, this brought comfort in the lives of people to save more money in order to invest it somewhere else to create an additional source of income. Second major reason, towards the change in lives by improved means of food preparation, is the saving of time. The world is so fast and people mostly prefer to make their time more fruitful in order to progress further in their relevant fields and hence every individual aims to give less time to non-productive items. For instance, in the distant past, people were cooking foods for themselves for every meal time, however, such issue has been solved by the invention of the freezer which has reduced the burden on housewives because food once prepared can be stored for longer in order to use in another time. Overall, this evidence the improvements that can be acknowledged from every individual lifestyle. In conclusion, it is clear that the significant changes made in the technological world have made the cooking easier and not a cumbersome work. This has affected the lives very positive in terms of reduction in waste and saving of precious time of people to utilize it on a profitable source to make it worthy.
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food
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ease
of peoples'
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lives
as well
as saved the
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time
, which can
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some
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important
works.
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But
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lives
of the
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people
? This essay will discuss that why I
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agree
that due to rapid
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changes
has
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eased
the
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lives
of
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people
in
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food
preparing and will then
finally
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come
to a reasoned conclusion.

There are two reasons which
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explain
that how
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food
preparation has made the
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lives
of
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people
developed.
Firstly
, is the provision of sophisticated materials of technology, which has made the wastage reduction to a
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very
low amount. In the past, there were no advanced inventions that we enjoy
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today
to cook
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food
for ourselves.
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People
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used
to rely
mostly
on hand made cooking and ancient methods, which were
ultimately
causing the issue of non-delicious meals and even the consideration of wastage of ingredients.
For example
, the introduction of new recipes through new methods has not
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only
made the taste of
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foods
tastier,
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but
also
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reduce
the amount of waste that
were caused
by the
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use
of ancient ways.
Thus
, this brought comfort in the
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lives
of
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people
to save more money in order to invest it somewhere else to create an additional source of income.

Second major reason, towards the
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change
in
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lives
by
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means of
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food
preparation, is the saving of
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time
. The world is
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so
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fast
and
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people
mostly
prefer to
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make
their
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time
more fruitful in order to progress
further
in their relevant fields and
hence
every individual aims to give less
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time
to non-productive items.
For instance
, in the distant past,
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people
were cooking
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foods
for themselves for every meal
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time
,
however
, such issue has
been solved
by the invention of the freezer which has
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reduced
the burden on housewives
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because
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food
once prepared can
be stored
for longer in order to
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use
in another
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time
.
Overall
, this evidence the improvements that can
be acknowledged
from every individual lifestyle.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
that the significant
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changes
made in the technological world have made the cooking easier and not a cumbersome work. This has
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affected
the
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lives
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very
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positive
in terms of reduction in waste and saving of precious
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time
of
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people
to utilize it on a profitable source to
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make
it worthy.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO 07 - Question 2State whether you agree or disagree with the following statement. Then explain your reasons, using specific details in your explanation. Learning through online courses is more effective than learning in the traditional classroom settin v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
404 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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