Nowadays parents are very busy with their work and they have no time to spend with their children. Due to this, the crime rate increase among youngsters who are under the age of 18. More than few psychologists believe that youngsters are not acquiring the social and emotional learning which were essential for parents and teacher. I completely agree with this view because children are learning everything from others.
In this modern era, if the both parents are working, then it would be a great benefit for their children's future because of this, many parents concentrate on their work. Furthermore, children are missing their informal education, which will create some bad thought to enjoy themselves. For instance, children habit is copying others, whether it is good or bad things and this intimating pattern creates their future. Apart from that, they are extremely satisfied when they are use electronic device and this will separate from the social
Teachers have the same responsibilities to make a great child. Children learn only informal education from their parents, but this is not enough to manage. Some staffs are very cruel to adolescents when they are not studying well. Many teachers behaviour were good when they teach to high grade students while, it is different for low grades. This difference creates a mental problem which will lead them to criminal or violent behaviour. In recent researchers in Finnland shows children who have a great bond between the parents and the teacher, they will probably succeed in their life
To conclude, youngsters fate depends on their parents and teachers because they can make them or break them.
Nowadays
parents
are
very
busy with their
work and
they have no time to spend with their
children
. Due to this, the crime rate increase among youngsters who are under the age of 18. More than few psychologists believe that youngsters are not acquiring the social and emotional learning which were essential for
parents
and
teacher
. I completely
agree
with this view
because
children
are learning everything from others.
In this modern era, if the both
parents
are working, then it would be a great benefit for their children's future
because of this
,
many
parents
concentrate on their work.
Furthermore
,
children
are missing their informal education, which will create
some
bad
thought
to enjoy themselves.
For instance
,
children
habit is copying others, whether it is
good
or
bad
things and this intimating pattern creates their future. Apart from that, they are
extremely
satisfied when they are
use
electronic device and this will separate from the social
Teachers have the same responsibilities to
make
a great child.
Children
learn
only
informal education from their
parents
,
but
this is not
enough
to manage.
Some
staffs are
very
cruel to adolescents when they are not studying well.
Many
teachers
behaviour
were
good
when they teach to high grade students while, it is
different
for low grades. This difference creates a mental problem which will lead them to criminal or violent
behaviour
. In recent researchers in
Finnland
shows
children
who have a great bond between the
parents
and the
teacher
, they will
probably
succeed in their life
To conclude
, youngsters fate depends on their
parents
and
teachers
because
they can
make
them or break them.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes