Tourism plays an imperative role in the development of the country. Its encouraging people to visit an area and explore the beauty of nature and man made. Tourism gives advantages to society and individuals. In this eassy I would like to strengthen my position by supplementary arguments in the ensuant paragraphs.
Firstly travelling to new places brings the same sort of education to a person. It explores someone in a different environment with whom they are unfamiliar. Such as culture, languages and food. These things bring about learning new stuff from the experience. For instance, I learned a new recipe for making rice when I was visiting to china. There i learnt how to cook fried rice. This recipe would not be a reality if I had no gone there. I addition to this I got able to learn, speak and listen to the Chinese language. Also, I learnt culture of various regions which helps me for increasing my knowledge.
On the other hand, Tourism also beneficial for society. It has been known for its boost to any economy. When more people travel to other places it creates a need for a growth in the development. Such as hotels, restaurants and malls. In result of this there would be a more jobs which will increase the employment rate of the society. In India, people mostly prefer to visit Goa during holidays and there are a variety of hotels and restaurants for serving the guests. Therefore half of the population in Goa depends on tourism. Moreover, tourism prevents historical things such as old forts and statues to attract people.
In conclusion, the tourism industry is growing more as compared to past years. Thus, it has some positive effects on both the people and community.
Tourism
plays an imperative role in the development of the country. Its encouraging
people
to visit an area and explore the beauty of nature and
man
made.
Tourism
gives advantages to society and individuals. In this
eassy
I would like to strengthen my position by supplementary arguments in the
ensuant
paragraphs.
Firstly
travelling to new places brings the same sort of education to a person. It explores someone in a
different
environment with whom they are unfamiliar. Such as culture, languages and food. These things bring about learning new stuff from the experience.
For instance
, I learned a new recipe for making rice when I was visiting to
china
. There
i
learnt
how to cook fried rice. This recipe would not be a reality if I had no gone there.
I addition
to this I
got
able to learn, speak and listen to the Chinese language.
Also
, I
learnt
culture of various regions which
helps
me for increasing my knowledge.
On the other hand
,
Tourism
also
beneficial for society. It has
been known
for its boost to any economy. When more
people
travel to other places it creates a need for a growth in the development. Such as hotels, restaurants and malls. In result of this there would be a more jobs which will increase the employment rate of the society. In India,
people
mostly
prefer to visit Goa during holidays and there are a variety of hotels and restaurants for serving the guests.
Therefore
half of the population in Goa depends on
tourism
.
Moreover
,
tourism
prevents
historical things such as
old
forts and statues to attract
people
.
In conclusion
, the
tourism
industry is growing more
as
compared to past years.
Thus
, it has
some
positive
effects on both the
people
and community.
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