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Tourism has increasingly so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give v.1

Tourism has increasingly so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give v. 1
There are some languages are widely used in verbal communications in different nations, whereas there is a rapid decrease in usages with others. This essay totally agrees that this a positive outcome because few languages will make communication easier as well as it will have advantages in the global economy, followed by a reasoned conclusion. Although more than sixty percentages of communications happen in gestures, but speaking a same dialect will break the iceberg in communication. It has been widely seen as the best result comes when everyone understands the problem and same speech makes it easier. For example, There was a research done by the University of Melbourne in cognitive behaviours in Problem Solving and the result was astonishing. It has been found that groups where everyone understands each other, they solve the problem faster than others. Another reason why speaking in a few tongues is beneficial, it helps the world to develop a strong economy. In everyday business the way of communications are email, chat and Phone calls. However, all these media need a language to talk and get feedback. It is easy to communicate in one or two languages than ten or hundred. Moreover, in the past, there were some speeches like Sumerian are no longer used and it did not bring any negative impact in our lives. In conclusion, there in a rise in certain languages such as English, Spanish, French, Japanese and Mandarin because of they are spoken by the most developed countries and some others like Soheli and Saskrit are not being spoken by many individuals. It is predicted that in the future there will be no more than twenty spoken languages in the world because to have an easy and effective communication and financial growth.
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languages
are
widely
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used
in verbal communications in
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different
nations, whereas there is a rapid decrease in usages with others. This essay
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agrees
that this a
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positive
outcome
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because
few
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languages
will
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make
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communication
easier
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as
well as it will have advantages in the global economy, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

Although more than sixty percentages of communications happen in gestures,
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but
speaking a same dialect will break the iceberg in
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communication
. It has been
widely
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seen
as the best result
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comes
when everyone understands the problem and same speech
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it easier.
For example
, There was a research done by the University of Melbourne in cognitive
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behaviours
in Problem Solving and the result was astonishing. It has
been found
that groups where everyone understands each other, they solve the problem faster than others.

Another reason why speaking in a few tongues is beneficial, it
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helps
the world to develop a strong economy. In everyday business the way of communications are email, chat and Phone calls.
However
, all these media need a
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language
to talk and
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get
feedback. It is easy to communicate in one or two
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languages
than ten or
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hundred
.
Moreover
, in the past, there were
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some
speeches like Sumerian are no longer
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used
and it did not bring any
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negative
impact in our
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lives
.

In conclusion
, there in a rise in certain
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languages
such as English, Spanish, French, Japanese and Mandarin
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because of they
are spoken
by the most
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developed countries
and
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some
others like
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Soheli
and
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Saskrit
are not
being spoken
by
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many
individuals. It
is predicted
that in the future there will be no more than twenty spoken
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languages
in the world
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because
to have an easy and effective
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
and financial growth.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Tourism has increasingly so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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