Too much money is spent on maintaining and repairing old buildings. Some people think that they should be knocked out to give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1
Too much money is spent on maintaining and repairing old buildings. Some people think that they should be knocked out to give way to modern buildings. v. 1
In the modern world, many people are willing to demolish old buildings, in order to construct modern skyscrapers, business districts or shopping centres. However, others feel that old constructions should be protected, because they are one of the national heritages. Personally, I reckon that individuals and authorities should take care of these constructions.
First and foremost, old buildings represent the history and art of ancient people. That is to say, construction materials, art works and domestic items are crucial for the next generation, if they are willing to know about their ancestors’ life. A good illustration of this is paintings, because nowadays, the vast majority of drawings are painted by the previous generation, which can help to know their tradition and culture. Secondly, living in old low-rise buildings is safer than the life in modern high-rise buildings. In this regard, it is widely though that tall structures can be damaged by natural disasters, such as blizzard and strong winds. For instance, in case of trouble, evacuation of people would be more organized than evacuating people from skyscrapers.
On the other hand, new constructions can be an innovative way to develop the economy. These buildings can save a plethora of time, because of its location. Consequently, office workers and city dwellers do not need to walk long distances, in order to get to their workplace. To illustrate, many town dwellers would like to live near their work, and it gives them an opportunity to use their time efficiently. Furthermore, living in new accommodation can offer comfort and convenience. Due to advanced technologies and sophisticated construction materials, individuals often choose such kind of buildings, instead of old one. For example, office workers can be gathered in a small space, and they can collaborate with colleagues, in order to expand their businesses.
In conclusion, although many people tend to think that old structures should be demolished, personally, I believe that these constructions are part of our history. Accordingly, they should be protected.
In the modern world,
many
people
are willing to demolish
old
buildings
, in order to construct modern skyscrapers, business districts or shopping
centres
.
However
, others feel that
old
constructions
should
be protected
,
because
they are one of the national heritages.
Personally
, I reckon that individuals and authorities should take care of these constructions.
First
and foremost,
old
buildings
represent the history and art of ancient
people
.
That is
to say,
construction
materials, art works and domestic items are crucial for the
next
generation, if they are willing to know about their ancestors’ life. A
good
illustration of this is paintings,
because
nowadays, the vast majority of drawings
are painted
by the previous generation, which can
help
to know their tradition and culture.
Secondly
, living in
old
low-rise
buildings
is safer than the life in modern high-rise
buildings
. In this regard, it is
widely
though that tall structures can
be damaged
by natural disasters, such as blizzard and strong winds.
For instance
, in case of trouble, evacuation of
people
would be more organized than evacuating
people
from skyscrapers.
On the other hand
, new
constructions
can be an innovative way to develop the economy. These
buildings
can save a plethora of time,
because
of its location.
Consequently
, office workers and city dwellers do not need to walk long distances, in order to
get
to their workplace. To illustrate,
many
town dwellers would like to
live
near their work, and it gives them an opportunity to
use
their time
efficiently
.
Furthermore
, living in new accommodation can offer comfort and convenience. Due to advanced technologies and sophisticated
construction
materials, individuals
often
choose such kind of
buildings
,
instead
of
old
one.
For example
, office workers can
be gathered
in a
small
space, and they can collaborate with colleagues, in order to expand their businesses.
In conclusion
, although
many
people
tend to
think
that
old
structures should
be demolished
,
personally
, I believe that these
constructions
are part of our history.
Accordingly
, they should
be protected
.
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