Currently, there are lots of products manufacturing by different companies around the world. They are using plenty of advertisements to sell their stuff to people, sometimes it affects buyers. In my opinion, I partially agree that peoples' willing to buy unnecessary household lures by advertisements.
On the one hand, advertisements are mainly placed to increase the sales of their manufacture. The growing number of international countries every year trying to upgrade their product's sales from the public, therefore, they are fixing billboard and telecasting commercial ads on Television with young attractive models, sometimes they are hiring some famous celebrities such as film actors, sports persons to act on it to lure the buyers to buy their products. Thus all the people get attracted through the publicity they try to get those products without analysing the needs of that. For example, online shopping mostly affected by every individual they usually send some mails and cookies to show up their marketings which push everyone to use some fake products, which is really disappointing measures.
On the other hand, we cannot blame ads every time, which has so many important advantages to the inhabitant and the users, because it helps to find out the real genuine products which will reduce the time of spending on finding the necessary goods. Moreover, it tends to figure out the ingredients and manufacturing details.
In conclusion, it is clear that ads are unavoidable in the business world, they always focus on sales to rise up, but human we are want to differentiate the needs before they try to use.
Currently
, there are lots of
products
manufacturing by
different
companies
around the world. They are using
plenty
of advertisements to sell their stuff to
people
,
sometimes
it affects buyers. In my opinion, I
partially
agree
that peoples' willing to
buy
unnecessary household lures by advertisements.
On the one hand, advertisements are
mainly
placed to increase the sales of their manufacture. The growing number of international countries every year trying to upgrade their product's sales from the public,
therefore
, they are fixing billboard and telecasting commercial ads on Television with young attractive models,
sometimes
they are hiring
some
famous celebrities
such as film actors, sports persons to act on it to lure the buyers to
buy
their
products
.
Thus
all the
people
get
attracted through the publicity they try to
get
those
products
without
analysing
the needs of that.
For example
, online shopping
mostly
affected
by every individual they
usually
send
some
mails and cookies to
show
up their
marketings
which push everyone to
use
some
fake
products
, which is
really
disappointing measures.
On the other hand
, we cannot blame ads every time, which has
so
many
important
advantages to the inhabitant and the users,
because
it
helps
to find out the real genuine
products
which will
reduce
the time of spending on finding the necessary
goods
.
Moreover
, it tends to figure out the ingredients and manufacturing
details
.
In conclusion
, it is
clear
that ads are unavoidable in the business world, they always focus on sales to rise up,
but
human we are want to differentiate the needs
before
they try to
use
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes