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Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.1

Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. v. 1
The negative implications of genetic engineering are often discussed in terms of two key areas, which are food production and the cloning of humans. Genetically modified crops are already being grown, and people are concerned that they may damage whole ecosystems as foods become resistant to diseases and natural predators. But perhaps even more worrying is the possibility that humans could be modified or cloned. Some people imagine a world in which cloned humans are used to fight wars or to provide body part replacements. Although perhaps not a threat to life on earth, the implications of such practices would be unprecedented. A more optimistic prediction, and one that I favour, is that humans will find ways to mitigate the risks and use genetic technologies in a responsible way. From the food production perspective, genetic engineering could be the solution to famine in developing countries, if, for instance, crops can be grown more reliably in harsh conditions. From a medical perspective, scientists may use genetic engineering to produce vaccines, to cure diseases, or to correct a genetic defect before a child is born. If properly regulated, even cloning can be done in a way that improves lives. For example, the cloning of individual organs, such as a heart or kidney, could be permitted for transplant purposes. The negative implications of genetic engineering are often discussed in terms of two key areas, which are food production and the cloning of humans. Genetically modified crops are already being grown, and people are concerned that they may damage whole ecosystems as foods become resistant to diseases and natural predators. But perhaps even more worrying is the possibility that humans could be modified or cloned. Some people imagine a world in which cloned humans are used to fight wars or to provide body part replacements. Although perhaps not a threat to life on earth, the implications of such practices would be unprecedented. A more optimistic prediction, and one that I favour, is that humans will find ways to mitigate the risks and use genetic technologies in a responsible way. From the food production perspective, genetic engineering could be the solution to famine in developing countries, if, for instance, crops can be grown more reliably in harsh conditions. From a medical perspective, scientists may use genetic engineering to produce vaccines, to cure diseases, or to correct a genetic defect before a child is born. If properly regulated, even cloning can be done in a way that improves lives. For example, the cloning of individual organs, such as a heart or kidney, could be permitted for transplant purposes.
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implications
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perspective
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lives
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, the
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of individual organs, such as a heart or kidney, could
be permitted
for transplant purposes.

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implications
of
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often
discussed in terms of two key areas, which are
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food
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production
and the
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cloning
of
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humans
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modified
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crops
are already
being grown
, and
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people
are concerned
that they may damage whole ecosystems as
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foods
become resistant to
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diseases
and natural predators.
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perhaps even more worrying is the possibility that
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humans
could be
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cloned
.
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people
imagine a world in which
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cloned
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humans
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to fight wars or to provide body part replacements. Although perhaps not a threat to life on earth, the
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implications
of such practices would
be unprecedented
.

A more optimistic prediction, and one that I
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favour
, is that
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humans
will find
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ways
to mitigate the
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risks
and
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use
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way
. From the
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food
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production
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perspective
,
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genetic
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engineering
could be the solution to famine in
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developing countries
, if,
for instance
,
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crops
can
be grown
more
reliably
in harsh conditions. From a medical
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perspective
, scientists may
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use
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genetic
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engineering
to produce vaccines, to cure
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diseases
, or to correct a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
genetic
defect
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before
a child
is born
. If
properly
regulated, even
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cloning
can
be done
in a
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way
that
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improves
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lives
.
For example
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cloning
of individual organs, such as a heart or kidney, could
be permitted
for transplant purposes.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
74Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
432 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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