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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? v.26

Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? v. 26
Travelling has witnessed an upward trail in recent times. This article explores the reasons behind the rise and also provides insights on the numerous benefits that travelling offers. Travelling is a trait unique to human species. No other living being undertakes a journey for the sheer thrill and pleasure behind it. The curious nature of man is the reason behind the urge to travel. As humans, we love to explore the unknown. Travelling provides an opportunity for it. Travelling is not a new-age phenomenon. Ancient travellers undertook hazardous journeys on foot to far-flung places, solely driven by their passion for finding out what lies yonder. With the development of the Maritime industry, sea-faring became the most sought after profession. Development in Automobiles, Hospitality and the Aircraft sector has provided a major boost to Travel. Distances that took months to cover can now be covered in a few hours. Travel is now affordable to virtually all classes of people. The benefits of travel cannot be stated in words. It is an experience that has to be lived and enjoyed. Travelling provides an opportunity to experience new cultures, various cuisines and meet different kinds of people. All these add to life’s rich experience. Another major benefit of travel is that it relaxes the mind. The more a person travels, his knowledge repository increases. During the course of a travel, one might experience unforeseen circumstances. The way we deal with them is to be taken as a learning experience. Lastly, Travelling has a lot of analogies with Life. Both journeys offer various kinds of experiences. Just as we gain maturity with each passing day of our life, so do we gain wisdom with every travel we undertake.
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Travelling
has witnessed an upward trail in recent times. This article explores the reasons behind the rise and
also
provides insights on the numerous benefits that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travelling
offers.

Travelling is a trait unique to human species. No other living being undertakes a journey for the sheer thrill and pleasure behind it. The curious nature of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
is the reason behind the urge to
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travel
. As humans, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to explore the unknown.
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Travelling
provides an opportunity for it.
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Travelling
is not a new-age phenomenon. Ancient
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travellers
undertook hazardous journeys on foot to far-flung places,
solely
driven by their passion for finding out what lies yonder. With the development of the Maritime industry, sea-faring became the most sought after profession. Development in Automobiles, Hospitality and the Aircraft sector has provided a major boost to
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Travel
. Distances that took months to cover can
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now
be covered
in a few hours.
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Travel
is
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now
affordable to
virtually
all classes of
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people
.

The benefits of
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travel
cannot
be stated
in words. It is an
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experience
that
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has to
be
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lived
and enjoyed.
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Travelling
provides an opportunity to
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experience
new cultures, various cuisines and
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meet
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different
kinds of
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people
. All these
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add
to life’s rich
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experience
. Another major benefit of
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travel
is that it relaxes the mind. The more a person
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travels
, his knowledge repository increases. During the course of a
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travel
, one might
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experience
unforeseen circumstances. The way we deal with them is to
be taken
as a learning experience.

Lastly
,
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Travelling
has
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a lot of
analogies with Life. Both journeys offer various kinds of
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experiences
.
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Just
as we gain maturity with each passing day of our life,
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so
do we gain wisdom with every
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travel
we undertake.
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IELTS essay Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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