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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? v.17

Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? v. 17
Nowadays, due to advancement in technology, it becomes easy to travel from one place to another. As a result, many people are travelling to various places, where in the past it was limited. Humans have used distinct ways of transport from air, sea or road to accomplish their visit for business, educational or family trip. Hence, the individual would know about various places and their culture. The main reason for a hike in the number of travellers is need to expand their business or collaborative work. For example, many industries today are selling their products in other states and countries, so, their employees must travel across the nation or world to expand their business. In addition to this, many educational institutes and companies are working in collaboration, as a result, there is frequent need of exchange of manpower to accomplish the task. On the other hand, visit of various places in the nation and overseas has been increased by family during the vacation or holidays, which has also raised the number of travellers. So, these are the possible reasons, due to which more civics are using transportation. Travelling also offer direct or indirect advantage to travellers. First the human will come to know about various culture, tradition and people of various places. As a result, folks can learn various positive insides of distinct regions on the earth. In case of travelling for fun and enjoyment, it offers precious time with family members and break from daily routine that is effective in many cases to boost individual’s performance in their job as well as daily routine work. All in all, due to comfort, various modes of travel and fast transportation, people are travelling more than before. I believe, it is a win-win situation for both travellers and various companies, who have business in this domain. In future, it seems that various additional modes of travel will be developed hence, plethora number of people will be travelling.
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business
, educational or family trip.
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various
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places
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travellers
is need
to expand their
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business
or collaborative work.
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industries
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travel
across the nation or world to expand their
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.
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many
educational institutes and
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companies
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, visit of
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various
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places
in the nation and overseas has
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by family during the vacation or holidays, which has
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.
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culture, tradition and
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places
.
As a result
, folks can learn
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various
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positive
insides of distinct regions on the earth. In case of
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travelling
for fun and enjoyment, it offers precious time with family members and break from daily routine
that is
effective in
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many
cases to boost individual’s performance in their job
as well
as daily routine work.

All in all, due to comfort,
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various
modes of
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and
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fast
transportation,
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people
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travelling
more than
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before
. I believe, it is a win-win situation for both
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and
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companies
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in this domain.
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additional modes of
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will
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34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? v. 17

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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