Many holiday makers explore places where the climate is far different from their homeland as part of their adventure. Although travellers struggle with environmental challenges while abroad, they will also gain significant life experiences. In my opinion, exploring different places are far better off despite the challenges that they will inevitably face.
The greatest benefit of travelling to different places with harsh climate conditions is that travellers will have life experiences that will improve their ability to understand different cultures and to survive in such conditions that would have been otherwise impossible if they had only explored their own countries. Being in another country requires travellers to push themselves beyond the norm into unusually difficult experiences. For example, when I was in Sahara desert, I was continually pushed out of my comfort zone into psychological states that were unique and novel and that I had to adopt no matter what. These ultra-challenging experiences are paradoxically the main advantage of exploring places with different conditions.
The main challenges that travellers will face while overseas is usually environmental challenges such as places with hot weather may make you dehydrated which in turn make you seriously ill. Places like Sahara desert where the climate is extremely hot are the main reason behind dehydration. For instance, while travelling in Sahara desert I was running out of water and there is no water widely.
Travelling to places like Sahara desert or Antarctica has become incredibly common. While explorer will do doubt experience environmental challenges, it is in fact, these challenges that lead to the main advantages of travelling abroad which is cultural and survival growth. In my opinion, experiencing different climates are more advantageous than disadvantageous.
Many
holiday makers explore
places
where the
climate
is far
different
from their homeland as part of their adventure. Although
travellers
struggle with environmental
challenges
while abroad, they will
also
gain significant life
experiences
. In my opinion, exploring
different
places
are far better off despite the
challenges
that they will
inevitably
face.
The greatest benefit of travelling to
different
places
with harsh
climate
conditions is that
travellers
will have life
experiences
that will
improve
their ability to understand
different
cultures and to survive in such conditions that would have been
otherwise
impossible if they had
only
explored their
own
countries. Being in another country requires
travellers
to push themselves beyond the norm into
unusually
difficult
experiences
.
For example
, when I was in
Sahara
desert
, I was
continually
pushed out of my comfort zone into psychological states that were unique and novel and that I had to adopt no matter what. These ultra-challenging
experiences
are
paradoxically
the
main
advantage of exploring
places
with
different
conditions.
The
main
challenges
that
travellers
will face while overseas is
usually
environmental
challenges
such as
places
with hot weather may
make
you dehydrated which in turn
make
you
seriously
ill.
Places
like
Sahara
desert
where the
climate
is
extremely
hot are the
main
reason behind dehydration.
For instance
, while travelling in
Sahara
desert
I was running out of water and there is no water
widely
.
Travelling to
places
like
Sahara
desert
or Antarctica has become
incredibly
common. While explorer will do doubt
experience
environmental
challenges
, it is in fact, these
challenges
that lead to the
main
advantages of travelling abroad which is cultural and survival growth. In my opinion, experiencing
different
climates
are more advantageous than disadvantageous.
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