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: Today it has become easier to prepare the food. How far has this changed our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience v.2

: Today it has become easier to prepare the food. How far has this changed our lives? 2
Cooking is integral part of the culture and evolved a lot in the last three decades. It is also the fact that with the advent of modern equipment, it is convenient now to cook than in the past and such developments brought new dimensions in our life. I shall explain the reasons for it in the below essay. Firstly, modern technology makes the food preparation easier and now tasty foods can be prepared without spending much effort in the kitchen. As a result, people particularly working women not only able to perform job but also manage the kitchen effectively. For instance, my sister who is engineer quickly prepares dishes using microwave and oven even after coming late from office. Secondly, in ancient time, owing to the complexity in process of making dishes, only women were responsible for cooking and men were quite reluctant to do such jobs. But in modern era, different culture mingled with each other and societies learned the techniques of minimizing the time and reduce cumbersome tasks, resulting, both man and women are able to cook equally and contributes in kitchen work. For instance, I learned how to make pizza when I was in Italy and it is more or less same food in my country but preparation is quite easy and now I cook with my wife. Finally, Easy cooking process helped to develop a new vibrant industry called restaurant industry. In last two decades, people started to eat out side vigorously and do not hesitate to even order the food at home from outside. This lead to emerge new economy and lots of young people gets employment from food industry and big food outlets are being run by entrepreneurs. To capitulate, food preparation is critical part of our life and in last so many years, it has been changing in some or other way. These changes impacted our life and even the food habits especially in metro cities where race against the time is ever lasting process.
Cooking is integral part of the culture and evolved a lot in the last three decades. It is
also
the fact that with the advent of modern equipment, it is convenient
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now
to cook than in the past and such developments brought new dimensions in our life. I shall
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explain
the reasons for it in the below essay.

Firstly
, modern technology
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makes
the
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food
preparation easier and
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now
tasty
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foods
can
be prepared
without spending much effort in the kitchen.
As a result
,
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people
particularly
working women not
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only
able to perform job
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but
also
manage the kitchen
effectively
.
For instance
, my sister who is engineer
quickly
prepares dishes using microwave and oven even after coming late from office.
Secondly
, in ancient time, owing to the complexity in process of making dishes,
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only
women were responsible for cooking and
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men
were quite reluctant to do such jobs.
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But
in modern era,
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different
culture mingled with each other and societies learned the techniques of minimizing the time and
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reduce
cumbersome tasks, resulting, both
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man
and women are able to cook
equally
and contributes in kitchen work.
For instance
, I learned how to
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make
pizza when I was in Italy and it is more or less same
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food
in my country
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but
preparation is quite easy and
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now
I cook with my wife.

Finally
, Easy cooking process
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helped
to develop a new vibrant industry called restaurant industry. In last two decades,
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people
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started
to eat
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out side
vigorously
and do not hesitate to even order the
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food
at home from outside. This lead to emerge new economy and lots of young
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people
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gets
employment from
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food
industry and
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big
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food
outlets are
being run
by entrepreneurs.

To capitulate,
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food
preparation is critical part of our life and in last
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so
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many
years, it has been changing in
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some
or other way. These
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changes
impacted our life and even the
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food
habits
especially
in metro cities where race against the time is ever lasting process.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay : Today it has become easier to prepare the food. How far has this changed our lives? 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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