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Changing a job may have both advantages and disadvantages – Do you agree or do you not. Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.2

Changing a job may have both advantages and disadvantages – Do you agree or do you not. Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v. 2
For last two decades, switching a job has been in vogue and more and more people can be seen changing jobs in their career. Sometimes chasing different jobs may bring dis-benefits as well but over and all, I believe that doing jobs at different organization provides immense opportunities for all kinds of development. There are different benefits of switching jobs. First and foremost, people get chance to work with different people and learn different things from environment too, thereby, people not only break the monotony in work but also get confidence of executing work at various places. For example, my brother set the personal target to find another job when he feels that there are not enough to learn in existing company. Another advantage is the expansion of personal network which plays a primary role in getting handsome opportunities. It is generally seen that networking becomes crucial for high profile job as people have to manage the work from different perspectives and get it done in challenging circumstances. Having wider contacts make the situation under control as people take help from other people in industries and open themselves for suitable positions. Finally, the biggest advantage of changing job is salary increment and career growth which lure the people to apply for different positions in market. In most the organizations, limited opportunities exists for growth and salary increment owing to saturation or economic conditions or others. Employees who have skills and self believe, prefers to utilize their capabilities for increase their earning or exposure. My sister for instance did not get the hike in last job and she applied at Microsoft Company and got job at much higher package. To sum-up, though change job may cause destabilization in some cases, it provides the opportunity for growth, learning and build confidence and so on. Person should weigh opportunities and take step forward for better future.
For last two decades, switching a
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job
has been in vogue and more and more
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people
can be
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seen
changing
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jobs
in their career.
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Sometimes
chasing
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different
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jobs
may bring dis-benefits
as well
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but
over and all, I believe that doing
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jobs
at
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different
organization provides immense
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opportunities
for all kinds of development.

There are
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different
benefits of switching
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jobs
.
First
and foremost,
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people
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get
chance to
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work
with
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different
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people
and learn
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different
things from environment too, thereby,
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people
not
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only
break the monotony in
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work
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but
also
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get
confidence of executing
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work
at various places.
For example
, my brother set the personal target to find another
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job
when he feels that there are not
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enough
to learn in existing
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company
.

Another advantage is the expansion of personal network which plays a primary role in getting handsome
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opportunities
. It is
generally
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seen
that networking becomes crucial for high profile
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job
as
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people
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have to
manage the
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work
from
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different
perspectives and
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get
it done in challenging circumstances. Having wider contacts
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make
the situation under control as
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people
take
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help
from other
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people
in industries and open themselves for suitable positions.

Finally
, the biggest advantage of changing
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job
is salary increment and career growth which lure the
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people
to apply for
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different
positions in market. In most the organizations, limited
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opportunities
exists for growth and salary increment owing to saturation or economic conditions or others. Employees who have
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skills
and self believe, prefers to utilize their capabilities for increase their earning or exposure. My sister
for instance
did not
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get
the hike in last
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job and
she applied at Microsoft
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Company
and
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got
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job
at much higher package.

To sum-up, though
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change
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job
may cause destabilization in
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some
cases, it provides the
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opportunity
for growth, learning and build confidence and
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so
on. Person should weigh
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opportunities
and take step forward for better future.
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IELTS essay Changing a job may have both advantages and disadvantages – Do you agree or do you not. Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
313 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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