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To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.5

To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.5
Developing countries can become a developed nation with the help of industrial units and the excellent infrastructure. Over the last few decades, the industrialization and the construction projects have increased at the rapid pace. It is a well known fact that industries and construction sites are the main contributors in deteriorating the air quality and the water pollution. This essay will elaborate the ways of preventing pollution caused due to these two factors. The two main factors of the water pollution are industrial waste and poorly planned construction projects. Industries are directly dumping their waste materials in water bodies like ponds, rivers or oceans. This contains very injurious substances which are inversely impacting the aquatic life. This can be prevented by installing efficient water treatment plants. For example, treated water can be used for domestic needs. Also, this will reduce the water shortage problem. Many times, the natural water bodies are altered to start construction work. In other words, strict policies should be made for treating sewage water in the industrial units. Similarly, harmful emissions from the furnaces and the residue of construction sites are directly released in the air. This increases carbon footprints in the atmosphere. The forest cover is also depleting at the fast pace to provide space for the new construction sites. This is not only harmful for the flora and the fauna, but also for the human beings. Stringent laws and policies should be introduced to check the air quality. For instance, to start any new venture, a clearance certificate from the environment ministry should be made mandatory. In short, stern monitoring is required to alleviate air pollution and to improve the air quality index. To conclude, the water and the air pollution is mainly caused due to unorganised construction and industrial plants. Advance technologies and strict laws should be used for eliminating pollution caused.
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Developing countries
can become a developed nation with the
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help
of
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industrial
units and the excellent infrastructure. Over the last few decades, the industrialization and the
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construction
projects have increased at the rapid pace. It is a well known fact that industries and
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construction
sites are the main contributors in deteriorating the
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air
quality and the
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water
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pollution
. This essay will elaborate the ways of preventing
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pollution
caused due to these two factors.

The two main factors of the
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water
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pollution
are
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industrial
waste and
poorly
planned
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construction
projects. Industries are
directly
dumping their waste materials in
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water
bodies like ponds, rivers or oceans. This contains
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very
injurious substances which are
inversely
impacting the aquatic life. This can be
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prevented
by installing efficient
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water
treatment plants.
For example
, treated
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water
can be
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used
for domestic needs.
Also
, this will
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reduce
the
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water
shortage problem.
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Many
times, the natural
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water
bodies
are altered
to
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start
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construction
work.
In other words
, strict policies should
be made
for treating sewage
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water
in the
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industrial
units.

Similarly
, harmful emissions from the furnaces and the residue of
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construction
sites are
directly
released in the
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air
. This increases carbon footprints in the atmosphere. The forest cover is
also
depleting at the
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fast
pace to provide space for the new
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construction
sites. This is not
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only
harmful for the flora and the fauna,
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but
also
for the human beings. Stringent laws and policies should
be introduced
to
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check
the
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air
quality.
For instance
, to
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start
any new venture, a clearance certificate from the environment ministry should
be made
mandatory. In short, stern monitoring
is required
to alleviate
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air
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pollution
and to
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improve
the
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air
quality index.

To conclude
, the
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water
and the
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air
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pollution
is
mainly
caused due to
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unorganised
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construction
and
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industrial
plants. Advance technologies and strict laws should be
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used
for eliminating
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pollution
caused.
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IELTS essay To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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