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To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history? Write at least 250 words. v.1

To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history? v. 1
History class is a part of the school curriculum in most schools. However, some people do not see the purpose of studying things that have happened in the past. Personally, I think studying history is of great value, even in the modern era, because studying history equips us with the knowledge to make the best decisions. If we don't study history, we will feel a lack of connection to our past and may well repeat mistakes that could have easily been avoided and When we study history, we benefit from the experiences of those who have come before us. Learning from their failures and successes gives us the knowledge to avoid mistakes and make wise decisions. For instance, a politician or business leader who is struggling with a difficult decision could learn about individuals in the past who faced a similar choice and learn about what they chose and what the outcome was. If history is ignored, the mistakes of the past are doomed to be repeated. Learning from the miscalculations and errors of historical figures can lend insight into our own lives and help us to avoid similar mistakes. Moreover, studying history teaches people about the culture they belong to. Without this knowledge, a person would feel disconnected and alone in life. They might not see the purpose of certain cultural traditions or customs and stop observing them, which would be a great loss to society. In conclusion, the value of history is undeniable. It serves as a guide through our dilemmas that lets us borrow the wisdom of the past and apply it to modern problems. In addition, history links us to our culture and traditions.
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the purpose of
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things that have happened in the
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.
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, I
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studying
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history
is of great value, even in the modern era,
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because
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studying
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history
equips us with the knowledge to
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make
the best decisions. If we don't study
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history
, we will feel a lack of connection to our
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past
and may well repeat
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mistakes
that could have
easily
been avoided
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When we study
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history
, we benefit from the experiences of those who have
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come
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before
us. Learning from their failures and successes gives us the knowledge to avoid
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mistakes
and
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make
wise decisions.
For instance
, a politician or business leader who is struggling with a difficult decision could learn about individuals in the
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past
who faced a similar choice and learn about what they chose and what the outcome was.

If
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history
is
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, the
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mistakes
of the
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past
are doomed
to
be repeated
. Learning from the miscalculations and errors of historical figures can lend insight into our
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own
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lives
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us to avoid similar
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.
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,
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studying
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history
teaches
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people
about the culture they belong to. Without this knowledge, a person would feel disconnected and alone in life. They might not
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see
the purpose of certain cultural traditions or customs and
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stop
observing them, which would be a great loss to society.

In conclusion
, the value of
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history
is undeniable. It serves as a guide through our dilemmas that
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lets
us borrow the wisdom of the
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past
and apply it to modern problems.
In addition
,
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history
links us to our culture and traditions.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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