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ReadingMany environmentalists support the current system of laws that works to save all species that may become extinct. They claim that the current variety of organisms that exist on Earth must be preserved. This idea has long been held as our moral and v.1

ReadingMany environmentalists support the current system of laws that works to save all species that may become extinct. They claim that the current variety of organisms that exist on Earth must be preserved. This idea has long been held as our moral and v. 1
Nowadays, our exposure to the electronic world has given us the opportunity to comment on the provided services and products, but this has some merits as well as certain drawbacks. This essay will discuss the negative and positive effects of product reviews. To begin with, there are several reasons why writing a product review is important. Firstly, by commenting on a product, others can go through these comments and gain the required information about it. as a result, this will help other consumers to select the right product and ensure the money is not wasted for nothing. For example, Amazon website is providing the consumers with a section to insert or read a comment which helps other consumers to choose the right product. Secondly, by writing a comment about a product or services that has completed in a perfect way, they do the marketing for the product. Accordingly, the product will gain a huge success from this advertisement that will increase the demand on it. Furthermore, as there are positive sides for writing a comment about a product, it has a negative side. To commence with, the internet had made the world connected and a small loophole in the quality of the services will impact the company and the product reputation. The customers can take the advantage of the internet to express their dissatisfaction and share it with the whole world by a single click. For instance, many companies have lost their customer due to bad service, which led to shut down the business. Moreover, a full product line could be impacted with small comments. Some customers list the side effects of a specific product where the interest of the product will be lost impacting the production of this product. To sum up, the internet provides the customers with a massive power to express their feedback. Although this has many positive effects for a product or services, it has negative sides that should not be ignored.
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products
,
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but
this has
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some
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negative
and
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positive
effects of
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product
reviews.

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begin
with, there are several reasons why writing a
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product
review is
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important
.
Firstly
, by commenting on a
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product
, others can go through these
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comments
and gain the required information about it.
as a result
, this will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
other consumers to select the right
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product
and ensure the money is not wasted for nothing.
For example
, Amazon website is providing the consumers with a section to insert or read a
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comment
which
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helps
other consumers to choose the right
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product
.
Secondly
, by writing a
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comment
about a
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product
or
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services
that has completed
Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with the adverb for "perfect"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a perfect way
, they do the marketing for the
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product
.
Accordingly
, the
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product
will gain a huge success from this advertisement that will increase the demand on it.

Furthermore
, as there are
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positive
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sides
for writing a
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comment
about a
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product
, it has a
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negative
side. To commence with, the internet had made the world connected and a
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small
loophole in the quality of the
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services
will impact the
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company
and the
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product
reputation. The
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customers
can take the advantage of the internet to express their dissatisfaction and share it with the whole world by a single click.
For instance
,
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many
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companies
have lost their
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customer
due to
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bad
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service
, which led to shut down the business.
Moreover
, a full
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product
line could
be impacted
with
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small
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comments
.
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Some
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customers
list the side effects of a specific
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product
where the interest of the
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product
will
be lost
impacting the production of this product.

To sum up, the internet provides the
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customers
with a massive power to express their feedback. Although this has
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many
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positive
effects for a
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product
or
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services
, it has
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negative
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sides
that should not be
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ignored
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay ReadingMany environmentalists support the current system of laws that works to save all species that may become extinct. They claim that the current variety of organisms that exist on Earth must be preserved. This idea has long been held as our moral and v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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