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Think critically about the following statement. A universal language should replace all languages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a universal language. v.1

Think critically about the following statement. A universal language should replace all languages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a universal language. v. 1
To introduce, there is an argument concerning if there are more merits than demerits of staying in a house when compared to living in a flat. While some individuals like to stay in a personal building, others prefer to dwell in an apartment because of several advantages and disadvantages. I strongly support that there are more benefits of staying in a house such as freedom and space than its detriments when compared to living in a flat. Living in a house posses several merits such as more space and freedom over its demerit which tend to be its high cost of maintenance. Referring to freedom, one who lives in a house does not have to abide by any rule or regulation due to the fact that most houses are built by the personal owners. In addition, most houses are more spacious than apartments in all scenarios. Using myself as a perfect illustration, I have lived in both houses and flats growing up, and as such, it is evident that many houses have spaces in garage and gardens. On the other hand, its obvious detriment is the high cost of building and maintenance. Most houses are usually more costly than renting or living in an apartment in all ramifications. Dwelling in a flat is also not a bad place to live mainly due to the cost effectiveness and high level of socialization. Apartments are good places to start off as young adults trying to make ends meet because utilities such as electricity bill, security bill, and waste bill are usually shared among the tenants. Due to this, there is a higher tendency of meeting new friends and socializing when living in an apartment than when compared to staying in a house mainly due to the increased number of individuals migrating in flats. A very good example which I remember vividly was when I was living in an apartment, I had the opportunity of meeting a very special person to me which is currently my wife. Therefore, staying in a flat creates room for meeting people and socializing with several people of different cultures and tribes. Nevertheless, there are demerits to living in a flat such as adhering to awkward rules and regulations, noise, little space, disturbances, and minimum security mention a few. In conclusion, both apartments and houses are good places to live in, but there are great merits and less detriments of staying in a house when compared to living in a flat with more disadvantages such as disturbance, its proneness to thieves and other evil vices.
To introduce, there is an argument concerning if there are more merits than demerits of
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staying
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house
when compared to
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living
in a
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flat
. While
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some
individuals like to stay in a personal building, others prefer to dwell in an
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apartment
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because
of several advantages and disadvantages. I
strongly
support that there are more benefits of
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staying
in a
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house
such as freedom and
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space
than its detriments when compared to
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living
in a flat.

Living in a
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house
posses several merits such as more
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space
and freedom over its demerit which tend to be its high cost of maintenance. Referring to freedom, one who
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lives
in a
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house
does not
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have to
abide by any
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rule
or regulation
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due
to the fact that most
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houses
are built
by the personal owners.
In addition
, most
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houses
are more spacious than
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apartments
in all scenarios. Using myself as a perfect illustration, I have
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lived
in both
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houses
and
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flats
growing up, and as such, it is evident that
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many
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houses
have
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spaces
in garage and gardens.
On the other hand
, its obvious detriment is the high cost of building and maintenance. Most
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houses
are
usually
more costly than renting or
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living
in an
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apartment
in all ramifications.

Dwelling in a
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flat
is
also
not a
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bad
place to
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live
mainly
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due
to the
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cost effectiveness
and high level of socialization.
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Apartments
are
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good
places to
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start
off as young adults trying to
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make
ends
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meet
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because
utilities such as electricity bill, security bill, and waste bill are
usually
shared among the tenants.
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Due
to this, there is a higher tendency of meeting new friends and socializing when
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living
in an
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apartment
than when compared to
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staying
in a
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house
mainly
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due
to the increased number of individuals migrating in
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flats
. A
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very
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good
example which I remember
vividly
was when I was
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living
in an
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apartment
, I had the opportunity of meeting a
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very
special person to me which is
currently
my wife.
Therefore
,
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staying
in a
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flat
creates room for meeting
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people
and socializing with several
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people
of
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different
cultures and tribes.
Nevertheless
, there are demerits to
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living
in a
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flat
such as adhering to awkward
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rules
and regulations, noise,
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little
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space
, disturbances, and minimum security mention a few.

In conclusion
, both
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apartments
and
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houses
are
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good
places to
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live
in,
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but
there are great merits and
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less
detriments of
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staying
in a
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house
when compared to
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living
in a
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flat
with more disadvantages such as disturbance, its proneness to thieves and other evil vices.
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IELTS essay Think critically about the following statement. A universal language should replace all languages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a universal language. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
427 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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