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There is no need to go out to see social cinema because it is better to see them on the TV or computer screen Do you agree or disagree v.1

There is no need to go out to see social cinema because it is better to see them on the TV or computer screen v. 1
It is a profoundly accepted fact that change is the only evidence to prove the growth of a country. As per the stated notion, some people put confidence in the alternatives individuals have currently. Even, the essay gives prominence to the latter statement. The most prominent espousing reason is the alternatives people have these days to compete with hunger. To illustrate this, one can enjoy a fresh appetising meal at home by using food delivering applications like Zomato and Swiggy, irrespective of time. In an addendum to this, variety in modes of transportation are time and cost effective. moreover, people have myriad of public transports to use in order to reduce the time of parking personal vehicles. For instance, metro, cabs and buses are in demand at present for providing on-time services at reasonable cost. Therefore, one can enjoy any transport suiting one's need, time and budget. Another dominant reason is the availability of options for a student in this day and age. Earlier, students had limited courses for the bachelor's degree, whereas, now an individual can pursue post graduate degree specifically in painting which wasn't to be had initially. Also, students can take online classes at home. Consequently, students even plan to study abroad for incredible exposure. In essence, there is a plethora of possibilities in almost every sector. As a result, food can be ordered at home no matter what the time is, due to the presence of multiple restaurants at 24 hour service, and as per one's need, affordability and time, a suitable conveyance is at hand. And, the education has also considered students' needs.
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profoundly
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accepted
fact that
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change
is the
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only
evidence to prove the growth of a country. As per the stated notion,
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
put confidence in the alternatives individuals have
currently
. Even, the essay gives prominence to the latter statement.

The most prominent espousing reason is the alternatives
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have these days to compete with hunger. To illustrate this, one can enjoy a fresh
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appetising
meal at home by using food delivering applications like
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Zomato
and
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Swiggy
, irrespective of time.

In an addendum to this, variety in modes of transportation are
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time
and cost effective.
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moreover
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have myriad of public transports to
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use
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
of parking personal vehicles.
For instance
, metro, cabs and buses are in demand at present for providing on-time services at reasonable cost.
Therefore
, one can enjoy any transport suiting one's need,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and budget.

Another dominant reason is the availability of options for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
in this day and age. Earlier,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
had limited courses for the bachelor's degree, whereas,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
an individual can pursue post graduate degree
specifically
in painting which wasn't to
be had
initially
.
Also
,
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students
can take online classes at home.
Consequently
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
even plan to study abroad for incredible exposure.

In essence, there is a plethora of possibilities in almost every sector.
As a result
, food can
be ordered
at home no matter what the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
is, due to the presence of multiple restaurants at
It appears that a hyphen is missing.
24 hour
service, and as per one's need, affordability and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, a suitable conveyance is at hand. And, the education has
also
considered students' needs.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay There is no need to go out to see social cinema because it is better to see them on the TV or computer screen v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
268 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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