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There is no longer enough natural resources to sustain current levels of economic growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.3

There is no longer enough natural resources to sustain current levels of economic growth. with this statement? v. 3
Recently, the demands of natural resources have risen dramatically across the world due to population growth. Some people state that we have not enough resources. However, there are some individuals who disagree with this opinion. In this essay, the issues behind this phenomenon will be examined. On the one hand, some people state that if the number of natural resource will continue to degrease we cannot have a comfortable life because natural resources are limited. According to a government research in the USA shows that if this situation will continue, the petrol will lose in 2050. Moreover, it is widely said that the number of population in the world will increase. This will make the amount of natural resource decrease. On the other hand, there are some individuals who disagree with above-mentioned perception. The demands of natural resources will be lessen owning to improving the technology. For example, the developments of technology such as electronic cars gave a positive impact in the society. By using this, we can decline the consumption of natural resources. Eventually, we will not need natural fuel. In my opinion, decreasing of natural resource is quite crisis, I think the loss of it give a negative impact in the society because even we won’t have a comfortable life any more. In conclusion, I agree with the idea that there is no longer enough natural resources to sustain this situation. In order to defense our life, the governments every countries should tackle this issue.
Recently, the demands of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
resources have risen
dramatically
across the world due to population growth.
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Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
state that we have not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
resources.
However
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
individuals who disagree with this opinion. In this essay, the issues behind this phenomenon will
be examined
.

On the one hand,
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
state that if the number of
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natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
resource
will continue to degrease we cannot have a comfortable life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
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natural
resources
are limited
. According to a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
research in the USA
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that if this situation will continue, the petrol will lose in 2050.
Moreover
, it is
widely
said that the number of population in the world will increase. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the amount of
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natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
resource
decrease.

On the other hand
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
individuals who disagree with above-mentioned perception. The demands of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
resources will be
Consider using the past participle "lessened"?
lessen
owning to improving the technology.
For example
, the developments of technology such as electronic cars gave a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
impact in the society. By using this, we can decline the consumption of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
resources.
Eventually
, we will not need
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
fuel. In my opinion, decreasing of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
resource
is quite crisis, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the loss of it give a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact in the society
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
even we won’t have a comfortable life
Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?
any more
.

In conclusion
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that there is no longer
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
resources to sustain this situation.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
order to defense our life, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "country"?
countries
should tackle this issue.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay There is no longer enough natural resources to sustain current levels of economic growth. with this statement? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
247 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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