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Snap judgments can never be trusted. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.2

Snap judgments can never be trusted. Use reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 2
In reality, not matter what kind of people and no matter when, we are certainly faced various decisions to make, such as marriage and other significant others. If we make personal decisions casually, they will lead to devastating outcome. Therefore, snap judgment cannot be trusted. For doctors, making important decisions lightly will cause patent’s death. In fact, the decision made by doctors is extremely important and crucial for both doctors and patents. That is one essential reason that only students trained a long time can they become doctors. They take great responsibility of patents. If they think decisions lightly, they cannot make up the serious results. Almost every countries, there are many cases that many patents dead result from the snap judgment made by doctors. If every doctor attach importance to make decisions, they can reduce the chances of unnecessary death of patents. For businessmen, snap judgment causes unexpected lose. Businessmen’s decisions not only involve money but also cooperation and other important elements of business. For example, once a time my father did not collected relative information to help him access the chances of the success of one project but to his experience. As a result, he make a severe mistake and causes losing ten million yuan lost and therefore was fired by his boss. Obviously, making decisions without thinking leads company to lose much. For the public, if we could not take as many factors as possible into account, we would regret and live in a unfortunate life. Certainly, we have to make a variety of decisions in our life, such as marriage and jobs. For example, my friend just met his wife three weeks and then decided to get married. As the beginning, the couple lead a happy life. Gradually, as knowing each other more, they had conflicts and even fights. Recently, they have planned to get a divorce and my friend’s life mess up. Everyone is supposed to be responsible to themselves. The best way to avoid some mistakes is to think highly and fully of decisions-making, especially significant ones. In a word, we cannot make personal decisions without thinking, which may cause the bad outcome and thus do harm to others. If other people make snap judgment, we cannot be trust and fully conduct them.
In reality, not matter what kind of
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people
and no matter when, we are
certainly
faced various
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decisions
to
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make
, such as marriage and
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other
significant others. If we
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make
personal
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decisions
casually
, they will lead to devastating outcome.
Therefore
, snap
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judgment
cannot
be trusted
.

For
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doctors
, making
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important
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decisions
lightly
will
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cause
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patent’s
death. In fact, the
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decision
made by
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doctors
is
extremely
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important
and crucial for both
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doctors
and
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patents
.
That is
one essential reason that
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only
students trained a long time can they become
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doctors
. They take great responsibility of
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patents
. If they
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think
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decisions
lightly
, they cannot
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make
up the serious results. Almost every
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countries
, there are
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many
cases that
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many
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patents
dead result from the snap
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judgment
made by
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doctors
. If every
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doctor
attach importance to
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make
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decisions
, they can
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reduce
the chances of unnecessary death of patents.

For businessmen, snap
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judgment
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causes
unexpected lose. Businessmen’s
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decisions
not
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only
involve money
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but
also
cooperation and
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other
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important
elements of business.
For example
, once a time my father did not
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collected
relative information to
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help
him access the chances of the success of one project
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but
to his experience.
As a result
, he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "makes", "made".
make
a severe mistake and
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causes
losing ten million yuan lost and
therefore
was fired
by his boss.
Obviously
, making
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decisions
without thinking leads
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company
to lose much.

For the public, if we could not take as
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many
factors as possible into account, we would regret and
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live
in
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a
unfortunate
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life
.
Certainly
, we
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have to
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make
a variety of
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decisions
in our
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life
, such as marriage and jobs.
For example
, my friend
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just
met his wife three weeks and then decided to
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get
married. As the beginning, the couple lead a happy
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life
.
Gradually
, as knowing each
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other
more, they had conflicts and even fights. Recently, they have planned to
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get
a divorce and my friend’s
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life
mess up. Everyone
is supposed
to be responsible to themselves. The best way to avoid
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some
mistakes is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
highly
and
fully
of decisions-making,
especially
significant ones.

In a word, we cannot
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make
personal
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decisions
without thinking, which may
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cause
the
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bad
outcome and
thus
do harm to others. If
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other
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people
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make
snap
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judgment
, we cannot be trust and
fully
conduct them.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Snap judgments can never be trusted. Use reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
379 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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