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There have been several complaints about the reception area. Your manager has asked you to suggest how to improve reception area. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterDescribe the complaints that have been madeSay why the reception area is importa v.1

There have been several complaints about the reception area. Your manager has asked you to suggest how to improve reception area. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterDescribe the complaints that have been madeSay why the reception area is importa v. 1
Tertiary schooling plays a vital role in human life. It is commonly believed that pupils ought to pay their higher education fee by on their own instead of getting help from the state, while I completely disagree with this statement and will support my viewpoints in following paragraph. To begin with, if the state will not aid their juvenile citizen to get into graduate school than these problems will happen, those students who do not have such privileges to afford their higher studies will not be able to get admission in their desired field and will not be able to perform in jobs at their highest for the rest of their life. For example, there is a report on South Asia that 55% students in subcontinent cannot afford the particular field where they desired to go and due to the lack of public university they have to switch their field. After that, the government should back their youngster to get into college because it does help the country’s economy, furthermore, The more people go into universities the more they will benefit their country’s economy, moreover, there will be less unemployment rate, they will be able to get a job in any organization, in addition to, they will think for the prosperity of themselves as well as the prosperity of the country, additionally, some of them even able to start their own business eventually it will help government to run the country. For instance, if someone starts a business, then they will hire some employees, they will pay tax to the government, so it will be a benefit for all from the person who started the business to his employees to eventual government. In conclusion, although there are a lot of people who think that a person who want to get college tuition should bear the cost of education by the owner, however, I believe that government ought to subsidize coaching for their citizen in order to use their true potential for the betterment of the country.
Tertiary schooling plays a vital role in human life. It is
commonly
believed that pupils ought to pay their higher education fee by on their
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own
instead
of getting
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help
from the state, while I completely disagree with this statement and will support my viewpoints in following paragraph.

To
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begin
with, if the state will not aid their juvenile citizen to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
into graduate school than these problems will happen, those students
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who
do not have such privileges to afford their higher studies will not be
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able
to
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get
admission in their desired field and will not be
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able
to perform in jobs at their highest for the rest of their life.
For example
, there is a report on South Asia that 55% students in subcontinent cannot afford the particular field where they desired to go and due to the lack of public university they
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have to
switch their field.

After that, the
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government
should back their youngster to
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get
into college
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because
it does
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help
the
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country’s
economy,
furthermore
, The more
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people
go into universities the more they will benefit their
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country’s
economy,
moreover
, there will be less unemployment rate, they will be
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able
to
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get
a job in any organization,
in addition
to, they will
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think
for the prosperity of themselves
as well
as the prosperity of the
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country
,
additionally
,
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some
of them even
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able
to
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start
their
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own
business
eventually
it will
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help
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government
to run the
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country
.
For instance
, if someone
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starts
a business, then they will hire
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some
employees, they will pay tax to the
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government
,
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so
it will be a benefit for all from the person
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who
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started
the business to his employees to eventual
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government
.

In conclusion
, although there are
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a lot of
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people
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who
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think
that a person
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who
want to
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get
college tuition should bear the cost of education by the owner,
however
, I believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
ought to subsidize coaching for their citizen in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
their true potential for the betterment of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay There have been several complaints about the reception area. Your manager has asked you to suggest how to improve reception area. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterDescribe the complaints that have been madeSay why the reception area is importa v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
336 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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