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there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the complaints that have v.1

there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the complaints that have v. 1
Sound pollution is increasing at an alarming rate. In this essay, I will shed some light on the problems associated with noise pollution like its harmful impact on human life and also suggest solutions to minimize it. Noise pollution is a problem because there are manifold issues associated with it. Firstly, the increased noise that people have to deal with while commuting to work puts them under tremendous pressure. This makes them impatient and in turn less productive at their office. Secondly, people suffer from hearing ailments because of noise pollution. Even if they stay at home all the time they may develop hearing issues due to the noise from machinery and factories in the surrounding. For example, studies have shown that people who live in noisy areas are more likely to suffer from hearing ailments. Exposure to high levels of noise can also lead to sleep deprivation and insomnia. Children and the elderly are the worst affected by this. Chronic sleep deprivation will eventually lead to various health problems. However, solutions are available to tackle these problems. The government should restrict honking in the congested areas. Peak hour traffic jam must be monitored by traffic police in places where honking is not allowed. Another solution is to grow more plants on roads and in residential areas because they help reduce the noise pollution by absorbing sound. In conclusion, increasing sound pollution is a global issue causing health problems and reduced productivity. Various means and methods like restricting honking and growing trees are available to prevent this situation from worsening.
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pollution
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some
light on the
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problems
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noise
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pollution
like its harmful impact on human life and
also
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Noise
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pollution
is a
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because
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that
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people
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have to
deal with while commuting to work puts them under tremendous pressure. This
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suffer from hearing ailments
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noise
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. Even if they stay at home all the time they may develop hearing issues due to the
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noise
from machinery and factories in the surrounding.
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, studies have shown that
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people
who
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live
in noisy areas are more likely to suffer from hearing ailments. Exposure to high levels of
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noise
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lead to sleep deprivation and insomnia. Children and the elderly are the worst
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eventually
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. The
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government
should restrict honking in the congested areas. Peak hour traffic jam
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must
be monitored
by traffic police in places where honking is not
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allowed
. Another solution is to grow more plants on roads and in residential areas
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help
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reduce
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noise
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pollution
by absorbing sound.

In conclusion
, increasing sound
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pollution
is a global issue causing health
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problems
and
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reduced
productivity. Various means and methods like restricting honking and growing trees are available to
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prevent
this situation from worsening.
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IELTS essay there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the complaints that have v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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