Over the last few decades, the university education easily available to anyone, which is has created a positive sign in an individual life and in society. But, some would argue that with the growing number of people into university the quality of teaching came down. This essay will discuss both drawbacks and positive aspects of this increasing education.
To embark upon, university study develops person's personality and creates a job givers mindset. Tertiary education mould student to cope up the pressure at work and how to deal with the problem. In addition, after completion of university study, they are likely to be paid more than the normal degree people due to the advancement into the subject. For example, students of Oxford university often paid well than the other person because this university trained their student on a real life scenario.
However, There are some university who compromise on the quality of education, due to the increasing number of students. Increasing number of admissions into university. Teacher's had hard time to concentrate on a few people they just teach the subject that's it. It doesn't give any practical knowledge to students due to a high number. For example, In India many people completed their MBA but still some are jobless or doing small jobs, because students are not up to date as the job market, which is the concern of today's youth.
In conclusion, The primary aspects of university education is to train students to become an entrepreneur and give jobs to the society. At the same time, the university should not comprise on quality of education because of students number increases.
Over the last few decades, the
university
education
easily
available to anyone, which is has created a
positive
sign
in an individual life and in society.
But
,
some
would argue that with the growing
number
of
people
into
university
the quality of teaching came down. This essay will discuss both drawbacks and
positive
aspects of this increasing education.
To embark upon,
university
study develops person's personality and creates a
job
givers mindset. Tertiary
education
mould
student
to cope up the pressure at work and how to deal with the problem.
In addition
, after completion of
university
study, they are likely to
be paid
more than the normal degree
people
due to the advancement into the subject.
For example
,
students
of Oxford
university
often
paid
well
than the other person
because
this
university
trained their
student
on a real life scenario.
However
, There are
some
university
who compromise on the quality of
education
, due to the increasing
number
of
students
. Increasing
number
of admissions into
university
.
Teacher's
had
hard
time to concentrate on a few
people
they
just
teach the subject that's it. It doesn't give any practical knowledge to
students
due to a high
number
.
For example
, In India
many
people
completed their MBA
but
still
some
are jobless or doing
small
jobs
,
because
students
are not up to date as the
job
market, which is the concern of
today
's youth.
In conclusion
, The primary aspects of
university
education
is to train
students
to become an entrepreneur and give
jobs
to the society. At the same time, the
university
should not comprise on quality of
education
because
of
students
number
increases.
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