Nowadays, the internet has become popular in the world. Many people are watching the latest news on the internet and newspapers are less important to young people. I strongly agreed with access to the latest news on the internet.
The first reason is watching the news on the internet is convenient for viewers. Many people have a computer and phones so that they can view the latest news on the internet anytime and anywhere and also they can watch the news on the internet when they have free time to view. For example, some of the people are very busy and they have free time at night or after work. Other than that, some of the people just can watch the news when they cannot go out such as in quarantine and so on.
The second reason is watching the news on the internet may not be charged the extra fees. Some of the people believe that watching the news on the internet is free and no need to pay the fees. And the costs of newspapers are more expensive than the news on the internet. For example, if we want to watch the news in traditional newspapers, we have to go out and pay the fees of newspapers.
In conclusion, I agree to access to the latest news on the internet. Although the newspapers are popular, it also will replaced totally by electronic sources like news on the internet. The reasons are watching the news on the internet is convenient for viewers and watching the news on the internet may not be charged the extra fees.
Nowadays, the internet has become popular in the world.
Many
people
are watching the latest
news
on the internet and
newspapers
are less
important
to young
people
. I
strongly
agreed
with access to the latest
news
on the internet.
The
first
reason is watching the
news
on the internet is convenient for viewers.
Many
people
have a computer and phones
so
that they can view the latest
news
on the internet anytime and anywhere and
also
they can
watch
the
news
on the internet when they have free time to view.
For example
,
some of the
people
are
very
busy and
they have free time at night or after work. Other than that,
some of the
people
just
can
watch
the
news
when they cannot go out such as in quarantine and
so
on.
The second reason is watching the
news
on the internet may not
be charged
the extra
fees
.
Some of the
people
believe that watching the
news
on the internet is free and no need to pay the
fees
. And the costs of
newspapers
are more expensive than the
news
on the internet.
For example
, if we want to
watch
the
news
in traditional
newspapers
, we
have to
go out and pay the
fees
of newspapers.
In conclusion
, I
agree
to access to the latest
news
on the internet. Although the
newspapers
are popular, it
also
will
replaced
totally
by electronic sources like
news
on the internet. The reasons are watching the
news
on the internet is convenient for viewers and watching the
news
on the internet may not
be charged
the extra
fees
.
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