To begin with, it is argued that are several reasons keep us motivated to work productively. One of the reasons for this is the salary. This essay agrees with this argument because every human wants to have better-living conditions; moreover, nobody wants to be considered as a looser. In this essay, I will discuss these points of view in more detail.
It is undoubtedly true that money is power for a good life. First of all, we can fulfill our needs and wants by buying things which are useful for us. That' s why we are encouraged to do our duties better because the loosing of a workplace will negatively affect our financial situation. Secondly, a good example will be, a recent study which shows that 70 percent of employees terminating the contract because of the low pay.
In modern society, nobody has a desire to be a looser. Unfortunately, nowadays without assets, you are nothing. More and more people value other ones for their success in terms of perfect economic circumstances. If the company and organization offer high wages, a worker will be stimulated to do his or her task in order to show to their family and friends that he is well enough good in terms of money. And this is also true, because without enough earning you can' t afford medicine and you can die.
To conclude, if we will take all these points into the consideration, we can state that money motivates workers to stay in the workforce and the reasons for that is to do not have a bad life and will be a winner.
To
begin
with, it
is argued
that are several reasons
keep
us motivated to work
productively
. One of the reasons for this is the salary. This essay
agrees
with this argument
because
every human wants to have better-living conditions;
moreover
, nobody wants to
be considered
as a looser. In this essay, I will discuss these points of view in more detail.
It is
undoubtedly
true that money is power for a
good
life.
First of all
, we can fulfill our needs and wants by buying things which are useful for us.
That&
#039; s why we
are encouraged
to do our duties better
because
the loosing of a workplace will
negatively
affect our financial situation.
Secondly
, a
good
example will be, a recent study which
shows
that 70 percent of employees terminating the contract
because
of the low pay.
In modern society, nobody has a desire to be a looser. Unfortunately, nowadays without assets, you are nothing. More and more
people
value other ones for their success in terms of perfect economic circumstances. If the
company
and organization offer high wages, a worker will
be stimulated
to do
his or her
task in order to
show
to their family and friends that he is well
enough
good
in terms of money. And this is
also
true,
because
without
enough
earning you
can&
#039; t afford medicine and you can
die
.
To conclude
, if we will take all these points into the consideration, we can state that money motivates workers to stay in the workforce and the reasons for
that is
to do not have a
bad
life and will be a winner.
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