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The woman expresses her opinion of the studend proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. v.1

The woman expresses her opinion of the studend proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. v. 1
Reliance of people on computers is rapidly increasing as they are used in different kinds of fields such as business, hospitals and crime detection. The computer was invented five years ago and after the invention of the personal computers and the laptop people's daily life has been vastly affected by them. However in my opinion, we should not make ourselves so much dependent on computers and keep going with a bit of doubtful approach. This essay will discuss a number of reasons why computers can not replace humans everywhere though they can be helpful to resolve complex tasks. In the general scenario we are using computers for the most of daily activities, whether at work or at home to relieve stress. As a result, most of the daily tasks of people's life have started involving the computers at ease. Hence, we can not think of the future without computers. In the future, they will be used to create more complex and sophisticated algorithms. For instance, they will run planes and also co-ordinate the planes in the vicinity of an airport. With this everything will go smoothly unless even a smallest program of the algorithm fails, within a blink of eyes we will face disaster and unimaginable chaos. This inability can not be neglected. Moreover, it seems like computers will replace teachers at school, collages and universities. For some people it may be a huge achievement, nonetheless it will bring drawbacks only. To illustrate this, Firstly, they will not be able to control students from flying around in class and pay attention. Secondly, they will not be able to motivate students and also help them to bring out best of themselves. In a nutshell, we can conclude that computers are at a great deal of lack to understand the temperament of humans. We cannot fully trust them and must use them in supervision. As a recommendation, for the sake of easiness of our life we can rely on computers but being suspicious of benefits.
Reliance of
people
on computers is
rapidly
increasing as they are
used
in
different
kinds of fields such as business, hospitals and crime detection. The computer
was invented
five years ago and after the invention of the personal computers and the laptop
people
's daily life has been
vastly
affected
by them.
However
in my opinion, we should not
make
ourselves
so
much dependent on computers and
keep
going with a bit of doubtful approach. This essay will discuss a number of reasons why computers can not replace humans everywhere though they can be helpful to resolve complex tasks.

In the general scenario we are using computers for the
most of daily
activities, whether at work or at home to relieve
stress
.
As a result
, most of the daily tasks of
people
's life have
started
involving the computers at
ease
.
Hence
, we can not
think
of the future without computers. In the future, they will be
used
to create more complex and sophisticated algorithms.
For instance
, they will run
planes
and
also
co-ordinate the
planes
in the vicinity of an airport. With this everything will go
smoothly
unless even
a
smallest program of the algorithm fails, within a blink of eyes we will face disaster and unimaginable chaos. This inability can not
be neglected
.

Moreover
, it seems like computers will replace teachers at school, collages and universities. For
some
people
it may be a huge achievement, nonetheless it will bring drawbacks
only
. To illustrate this,
Firstly
, they will not be able to control students from flying around in
class
and pay attention.
Secondly
, they will not be able to motivate students and
also
help
them to bring out best of themselves.

In a nutshell, we can conclude that computers are at a great deal of lack to understand the temperament of humans. We cannot
fully
trust them and
must
use
them in supervision. As a recommendation, for the sake of easiness of our life we can rely on computers
but
being suspicious of benefits.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The woman expresses her opinion of the studend proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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