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The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.3

The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour. with this statement? v. 3
hitting students in the schools are in decreasing order they should be motivated to change their activities rather than physical torture. It' s true, an effective approach for changing student studies is not only the physical punishment whether with such attempts the students stop going to school. The punishment may hamper the brain development of a student, the different way of treating can shift a student cycle. On the one hand, no scholar wants to move schools for education when they are punished harshly, improving the teaching strategy helps to boom a mind and make them funny rather than a narrow mind. Everyone always wants to get fear-free education lots of consequences arises with a small change in teaching methodologies. Even the students are considered as the pillars of a nation proper care with them in education can shift the direction of a country. Threatening makes them a compulsion to do the activities, but it won' t be the exact output as expected. The whole education system might be in a trap with corporal punishment the scholars stop moving school for education even it creates a problem for a government in the long run. On the other hand, The researchers are making a topic about brain development in early childhood the punishment in school ages can affect its development cycle. Threatening, harassing, and physical torture can reduce the performance level and destroy a brain. we also believe that the morning shows the days, so if someone is affected in the starting of life, then it' s hard to spend their entire life. The changed approach in teaching and learning annotations are one of the effective solutions. For example, we can give logical punishment like doing the 100 pages of handwriting which can make them angry but they will grow their ability. Those approaches are effective techniques of learning, the one who gets punished thinks that he is punished but in a realistic it' s opposite. In conclusion, physical punishment is not always the solution for a problem, but effective strategies can migrate students performance to the highest level even increases a shape in creativity.
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hitting
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schools
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torture.
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effective
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student
studies is not
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only
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physical
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punishment
whether with such attempts the
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students
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stop
going to
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school
. The
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punishment
may hamper the brain development of a
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student
, the
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different
way of treating can shift a
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student
cycle.

On the one hand, no scholar wants to
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move
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schools
for
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education
when they
are punished
harshly
, improving the teaching strategy
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helps
to boom a mind and
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make
them
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funny
rather
than a narrow mind. Everyone always wants to
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get
fear-free
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education
lots of consequences arises with a
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small
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change
in teaching methodologies. Even the
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students
are considered
as the pillars of a nation proper care with them in
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education
can shift the direction of a country. Threatening
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makes
them a compulsion to do the activities,
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but
it
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won&
#039; t be the exact output as
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expected
. The whole
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education
system might be in a trap with corporal
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punishment
the scholars
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stop
moving
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school
for
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education
even it creates a problem for a
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government
in the long run.

On the other hand
, The researchers are making a topic about brain development in early childhood the
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punishment
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
ages can affect its development cycle. Threatening, harassing, and
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physical
torture can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the performance level and
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destroy
a brain.
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we
also
believe that the morning
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shows
the days,
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so
if someone is
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affected
in the starting of life, then
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it&
#039; s
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hard
to spend their entire life. The
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changed
approach in teaching and learning annotations are one of the
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effective
solutions.
For example
, we can give logical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
like doing the 100 pages of handwriting which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them angry
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they will grow their ability. Those approaches are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
effective
techniques of learning, the one who
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gets
punished
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thinks
that he
is punished
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but
in a realistic
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it&
#039; s opposite.

In conclusion
,
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physical
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punishment
is not always the solution for a problem,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
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effective
strategies can migrate
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students
performance to the highest level even increases a shape in creativity.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour. with this statement? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
354 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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