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The university is currently considering possible locations on campus for displaying paintings and other artwork by students. I think the lobby at the entrance to the student center would be a great location. Since many students pass through the Student ce v.1

The university is currently considering possible locations on campus for displaying paintings and other artwork by students. I think the lobby at the entrance to the student center would be a great location. Since many students pass through the Student ce v. 1
These days learning online have been increasing prevalence due to the advent of technology. As it is a cost-effective and convenient method to get educated; however, it has numerous drawbacks such as the dearth of face to face coordination and lack of classroom atmosphere. Online study offers many benefits to students. One of them is convenience. Since students are not required to sit and study at one place and at a fixed time like in classroom teaching, which means that they can pursue their course regardless of time and place according to own flexibility. Cost-effectiveness is another positive aspect. A student can gain through learning online because many adults who wish to do tertiary education is not able to continue their study due to the exorbitant cost of tuition fees. Such online courses give them a chance with a low cost not to discontinue their further studies. For instance, the Times of India reported in March 2017 that 53% of total students prefer learning online rather than classroom teaching because of the low costcost. However, there are a lot of disadvantages to the online course. Lack of direct interaction between the teacher and student is the biggest drawback of it. In the classroom, invigilators are always there to keep an eye on pupil and guide them to understand them any query or puzzle and make them aware of making further mistakes, whereas, this concept is completely missed in online learning. As a result, there is a possibility to make error ahead of the students. Another negative factor of online study, which cannot be overlooked is missing classroom ambience. In the classroom, there is healthy competition with our friends to get good marks in subjects and teachers to teach with the help of blackboard and chalk, which is missing while learning online. For example, in India, 55% of total students who are doing online studies often quit their course in the middle due to lack of classroom atmosphere. In conclusion, although online course provides many benefits to students with low cost and flexibility, it has a number of downsides such as lack of interaction with teachers and classroom ambience.
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have been increasing prevalence due to the advent of technology. As it is a cost-effective and convenient method to
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get
educated;
however
, it has numerous drawbacks such as the dearth of face to face coordination and
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lack
of classroom atmosphere.

Online
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offers
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many
benefits to
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students
. One of them is convenience. Since
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students
are not required to sit and
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study
at one place and at a
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fixed
time like in classroom teaching, which means that they can pursue their
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course
regardless of time and place according to
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own
flexibility. Cost-effectiveness is another
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positive
aspect. A
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student
can gain through
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learning
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online
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because
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many
adults who wish to do tertiary education is not able to continue their
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study
due to the exorbitant cost of tuition fees. Such
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online
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courses
give them a chance with a low cost not to discontinue their
further
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studies
.
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,
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the Times of India
reported in March 2017 that 53% of total
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students
prefer
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learning
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online
rather
than classroom teaching
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because
of the low
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costcost
.

However
, there are
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a lot of
disadvantages to the
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online
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course
.
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Lack
of direct interaction between the teacher and
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student
is the biggest drawback of it. In the classroom, invigilators are always there to
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keep
an eye on pupil and guide them to understand them any query or puzzle and
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make
them aware of making
further
mistakes, whereas, this concept is completely missed in
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online
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learning
.
As a result
, there is a possibility to
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make
error ahead of the
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students
. Another
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negative
factor of
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online
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study
, which cannot
be overlooked
is missing classroom ambience. In the classroom, there is healthy competition with our friends to
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get
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good
marks in subjects and teachers to teach with the
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help
of blackboard and chalk, which is missing while
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learning
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online
.
For example
, in India, 55% of total
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students
who are doing
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online
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studies
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often
quit their
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course
in the middle due to
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lack
of classroom atmosphere.

In conclusion
, although
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online
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course
provides
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many
benefits to
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students
with low cost and flexibility, it has a number of downsides such as
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lack
of interaction with teachers and classroom ambience.
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IELTS essay The university is currently considering possible locations on campus for displaying paintings and other artwork by students. I think the lobby at the entrance to the student center would be a great location. Since many students pass through the Student ce v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
358 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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