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The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. v.2

The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. v. 2
The table compares the conversion in the number of inhabitants who went to work by bicycle, in twelve locations in the United Kingdom, from 2001 to 2011. Overall, the number of commuters cycling to work rose dramatically in ten years, and inner London had the highest percentage of changing in the periods. During this time, in inner London, the number of residents cycling increased significantly from 43, 494 in 2001 to 106, 219 in 2011, and this changing rate was the highest point (144%). By contrast, although outer London had the second highest people who went to work by bicycle in 2001, the proportion change of commuters was only 45% which was the least in ten years. The percentage changing, in Brighton and Hove and Bristol, was the second (109%) and the third biggest (94%) at the end of the periods, respectively. In the periods, the number of residents cycling to work in remain eight areas also climbed up, but always below 10, 000.
The table compares the conversion in the
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number
of inhabitants who went to
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work
by bicycle, in twelve locations in the United Kingdom, from 2001 to 2011.

Overall
, the
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number
of commuters cycling to
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work
rose
dramatically
in ten years, and inner London had the highest percentage of changing in the periods.

During this time, in inner London, the
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number
of residents cycling increased
significantly
from 43, 494 in 2001 to 106, 219 in 2011, and this changing rate was the highest point (144%). By contrast, although outer London had the second highest
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people
who went to
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work
by bicycle in 2001, the proportion
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change
of commuters was
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only
45% which was the least in ten years.

The percentage changing, in Brighton and Hove and Bristol, was the second (109%) and the third biggest (94%) at the
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end
of the periods,
respectively
. In the periods, the
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number
of residents cycling to
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work
in remain eight areas
also
climbed up,
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always below 10, 000.
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IELTS essay The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. v. 2

Essay
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4 paragraphs
164 words
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