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The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. v.1

The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. v. 1
The serious issue of global environmental problems is increasing day by day. I totally disagree with this statement that such issues should be handled by a particular organization. This essay will discuss my opinion on how the public as well as the government should come together to fight against this major issue. Global warming is rising every day, the ice caps are melting because of which the sea level is increasing resulting in loosing of land. The flora and fauna are on the stage of extinction and the cases of health problem such as cancer and asthma are increasing due to pollution. All these problems are caused because every individual is being unconcerned about this and taking nature for granted. In my opinion, it is not the only responsibility of an organization or government, but also it is the duty of every person to take this problem seriously and act accordingly. The government should make strict laws who eradicate or do wastage of renewable of resources. They should charge heavy penalties on people who burn crackers, fossil fuels, or wood. In addition, they should run awareness campaigns on a huge level so that the public gets aware of the upcoming scenarios which will start happening in their surroundings. As an individual we can give our bit by using minimum use of plastic, save water and electricity and travel by public transport. To conclude, each act of an individual counts and the support of government is really important. Therefore, the government and the public should join hands together to take steps to handle the environmental issues. Every person, whether he’s a member of a senior authority or a simple workman, they should think it as their sole responsibility to save their planet.
The serious issue of global environmental
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problems
is increasing day by day. I
totally
disagree with this statement that such issues should
be handled
by a particular organization. This essay will discuss my opinion on how the
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public
as well
as the
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government
should
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come
together to fight against this major issue.

Global warming is rising every day, the ice caps are melting
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because
of which the sea level is increasing resulting in loosing of land. The flora and fauna are on the stage of extinction and the cases of health
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problem
such as cancer and asthma are increasing due to pollution. All these
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problems
are caused
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
every individual is
being unconcerned
about this and taking nature for granted. In my opinion, it is not the
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only
responsibility of an organization or
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government
,
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but
also
it is the duty of every person to take this
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problem
seriously
and act
accordingly
.

The
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government
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
strict laws who eradicate or do wastage of renewable of resources. They should charge heavy penalties on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who burn crackers, fossil fuels, or wood.
In addition
, they should run awareness campaigns on a huge level
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so
that the
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public
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
aware of the upcoming scenarios which will
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start
happening in their surroundings. As an individual we can give our bit by using minimum
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of plastic, save water and electricity and travel by
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public
transport.

To conclude
, each act of an individual counts and the support of
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government
is
really
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important
.
Therefore
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
and the
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public
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
hands together to take steps to handle the environmental issues. Every person, whether he’s a member of a senior authority or a simple workman, they should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it as their sole responsibility to save their planet.
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As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS essay The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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